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  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ mbphan

    Oh goodness! Thank you so much! I never say no to a good My Chem fanfic, so I feel you. But thank you so much for the compliments! They mean so much, and I'm really glad that you picked my fic out of all of the really great originals on here! And I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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    July 18th, 2015 at 07:14am
  • mbphan

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    I just found this fic and read the whole thing as quick as I could. I pretty much only read band fics and such, not original character stories but this was so good! I loved it!
    July 17th, 2015 at 01:43pm
  • mbphan

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    I just found this fic and read the whole thing as quick as I could. I pretty much only read band fics and such, not original character stories but this was so good! I loved it!
    July 17th, 2015 at 01:42pm
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ eragorn122

    Thank you so much! I'm so thrilled that you liked it! Hug

    B x
    July 10th, 2015 at 09:03pm
  • eragorn122

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    This was absolutely fantastic. You should be proud of yourself.
    July 10th, 2015 at 06:56pm
  • Ace Lightning.

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    CANT BELIEVE THIS IS OVER :'-(
    July 7th, 2015 at 01:33am
  • crysbaby96

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    This is one of my favorite stories and i'm incredibly sad that its ending ... but i'm super excited for the sequel!!! Very Happy
    June 8th, 2015 at 01:32am
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ tarotera

    You're way too kind! Thank you, though! Hug
    April 25th, 2015 at 06:35am
  • tarotera

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    I'm scared that it's almost finished <////3 BUT I DEFO ENJOYED THE FEELS TRIP! Thanks for this wonderful experience Yummy Octopie <3
    April 21st, 2015 at 03:36pm
  • tarotera

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    I'm scared that it's almost finished <////3 BUT I DEFO ENJOYED THE FEELS TRIP! Thanks for this wonderful experience Yummy Octopie <3
    April 21st, 2015 at 03:36pm
  • eragorn122

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    @ Yummy Octopie
    You did great, a story doesn't need to adhere to be perfectly aligned with reality. It was a great scene and emotional which I assume was what you were going for. :)
    April 16th, 2015 at 11:31pm
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    @ Hey Jude

    Oh geeze. That means a ton. Thank you so much! :D
    April 16th, 2015 at 06:31am
  • Hey Jude

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    They are too cute. You do such a good job characterizing both. I feel like sometimes with other writers, the characters are lost in smutty scenes, because the sole focus is sex. I really like that they acted and reacted in the way Avery and Max would, not just two guys going at it.
    April 16th, 2015 at 05:23am
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ eragorn122

    Thank you so much! I hope it wasn't annoying for you to read and I'll be sure to fix it for next time!

    B x
    April 14th, 2015 at 06:52am
  • crysbaby96

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    Swoon I'm seriously blushing. I absolutely love it was so well written and you can really feel all of the love and emotions in the chapter. (The whole story really.) I'm in love!!
    April 14th, 2015 at 04:33am
  • eragorn122

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    The first time is painful no matter what and you can't feel someone release in you. Those both make for bad tender moments in stories however so I approve.
    April 14th, 2015 at 03:45am
  • neverland-

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    this chapter was very well written, still my number one favorite story. you write beautifully x
    April 14th, 2015 at 12:45am
  • lynseygardnerr

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    That was so well written. I love this story.
    April 14th, 2015 at 12:26am
  • X-bang_______x-X

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    sequel -all of the yes !!!!
    April 9th, 2015 at 09:41am
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ TayFreak

    Oh gosh. This is so long and I'm so sorry it took you all day. But thank you so much! :D

    B x
    April 8th, 2015 at 09:27pm
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