Oh my goodness gracious, filler or not, this chapter is still something to be adored. I really love the way you describe things and how tangible your characters' personalities feel. Nothing feels out of place or without purpose, making even the actual filler chapters seem important and reasonable. This is one of my favorite stories right now, and I think you and your beta are doing a fantastic job with this. I love you both and wish you the best.
So. Cute. And I love how the situation was handled (and also how it brought out some of Avery's insecurities about Max leaving him). It totally showed what Max said in an earlier chapter, about how there had been willing girls, and he had taken the opportunities, but Avery is different because he is special to him.
Have a fantastic New Year's! I can't wait for more! =D
Hey! Again, thank you so much for your wonderful comments! They mean so much to me :) A beta is like an editor. All of this fic has been previously edited by me and me alone. And as much as I try, there are always mistakes that I miss. So thankfully, I now have a editor! (or beta, whichever you prefer!) And don't feel dumb at all! :D
YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! I do a little fist pump every time you update. I love it! They are so adorable! And I'm glad someone finally mentioned how bad they are at communicating sometimes.
Also I feel so dumb...I do not know what a beta is. What is it? =o
Oh gosh, thanks! No worries about the lack of comments. I'm taking a shit ton of classes myself, so I completely understand. It means so much to me when people comment (especially those that are always commenting). The amount of warm 'n fuzzies it gives me is unreal. But please, don't worry about the lack of comments! Focus on the terrible amount of classes you're taking :) And have a happy Thanksgiving yourself!