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  • tarotera

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    omg I'm wishing for the best for Max and Allie, especially Allie ;u;
    January 21st, 2015 at 06:16pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    This is such a cute story. I can't wait to read more.
    January 8th, 2015 at 05:40pm
  • BlindedbyLight

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    Obsessed with everything about this story! And obsessed with the way you write :) you should write more slash in the future!
    January 7th, 2015 at 10:31pm
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Cute update.
    January 6th, 2015 at 12:54am
  • tarotera

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    by the way, nice music taste Avery!
    January 5th, 2015 at 02:52pm
  • tarotera

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    awwww they never fail to kill me with their cuteness ;u;
    January 5th, 2015 at 03:48am
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ Corrupt_Perfection

    Oh gosh. Thank you so much Embarassed

    B x
    January 5th, 2015 at 03:41am
  • crysbaby96

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    This was such a lovely chapter. Filler or not it was amazing and adds so much to the story. Can't wait for more!!! :)
    January 5th, 2015 at 01:46am
  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    Oh my goodness gracious, filler or not, this chapter is still something to be adored. I really love the way you describe things and how tangible your characters' personalities feel. Nothing feels out of place or without purpose, making even the actual filler chapters seem important and reasonable. This is one of my favorite stories right now, and I think you and your beta are doing a fantastic job with this. I love you both and wish you the best.
    January 5th, 2015 at 01:04am
  • Hey Jude

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    So. Cute. And I love how the situation was handled (and also how it brought out some of Avery's insecurities about Max leaving him). It totally showed what Max said in an earlier chapter, about how there had been willing girls, and he had taken the opportunities, but Avery is different because he is special to him.

    Have a fantastic New Year's! I can't wait for more! =D
    December 30th, 2014 at 05:07am
  • crysbaby96

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    Aaw. Avery is such a horny drunk! But it's adorable how much of a gentleman Max is. I love it!
    December 30th, 2014 at 01:18am
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Aaaw. How adorable! Max is truly a gentleman. Too cute!
    December 29th, 2014 at 08:34pm
  • Hey Jude

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    Oh okay that makes sense! Thanks! And I mean it, I love your writing, I love this story, and I can't wait for more! :)
    December 26th, 2014 at 01:41am
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ Hey Jude

    Hey! Again, thank you so much for your wonderful comments! They mean so much to me :) A beta is like an editor. All of this fic has been previously edited by me and me alone. And as much as I try, there are always mistakes that I miss. So thankfully, I now have a editor! (or beta, whichever you prefer!) And don't feel dumb at all! :D

    Happy Holidays!
    B x
    December 24th, 2014 at 11:12pm
  • Hey Jude

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    YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! I do a little fist pump every time you update. I love it! They are so adorable! And I'm glad someone finally mentioned how bad they are at communicating sometimes.

    Also I feel so dumb...I do not know what a beta is. What is it? =o
    December 24th, 2014 at 06:35pm
  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    This story is so amazing, and I absolutely love it.
    December 24th, 2014 at 10:24am
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Absolutely adorable.
    December 24th, 2014 at 09:37am
  • crysbaby96

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    oooo so cute!! Absolutely love it!
    December 14th, 2014 at 03:31am
  • Irony

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    lol they are so cute. it hurts
    November 26th, 2014 at 10:35pm
  • Yummy Octopie

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    @ Hey Jude

    Oh gosh, thanks! No worries about the lack of comments. I'm taking a shit ton of classes myself, so I completely understand. It means so much to me when people comment (especially those that are always commenting). The amount of warm 'n fuzzies it gives me is unreal. But please, don't worry about the lack of comments! Focus on the terrible amount of classes you're taking :) And have a happy Thanksgiving yourself!

    B x
    November 26th, 2014 at 07:03am