Can't Remember to Forget You - Comments

Another amazing Zacky fanfiction even though more than Zacky is in it, haha. Your stories are so lovely, they make me want to write my own Zacky Baker fan fiction, ahaha

Anyway, like always - the flow is amazing, there are no patches in the plot, it's just amazing. I really love this. Like, your writing is stunning.

What a pleasant update! I like the interaction between Olivia and Brian and all his questions.

What a pleasant update! I like the interaction between Olivia and Brian and all his questions.

I like inquisitive Brian, ahah! But he was all sweet offering her a ride, and she was equally sweet in cooking him dinner!
Loved this update :)

Loving this! Can't wait for more xxx

I haven't read very far into the story because I have a lot of my plate but from what I've read I enjoy it. The clumsiness of Zacky. The ownership of the bookstore. I like build up of the character development. I was interested to know she had seizures and hated going to clubs. I wish I could read more of this but considering it's not my cup of tea but I will say your writing is magnificent and it's grammar is flawless that I can see.

I also want to say your layout is perfect for the story and I appreciate the pleasantry of the layout. Great job :)

hopefully Wren will cut Zacky some slack now because that was way too sweet of him

Goodness, I think after this little episode Wren should start being a little less hostile towards Zacky ;) but at least they're hanging out.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Aw, I'm loving this so far!
The way they met the guys was really funny, especially with the way they both despised them at first. But I'm loving how they're slowly getting to know them.
Please update soon :)

Woo, some relationship development with Brian! I loved how chill this chapter was, but how much you had it filled with (if that makes sense). The dialogue and story just has such a natural feel to it.

Nice update!

I'm really hoping that Liv hits it off with Brian. They'd be good for each other.

Please update again soon. Xxx

wow that first chap was long! i really love the character development you start off with. it's already wonderful & i love all the diff brands of variety & the such that ive read so far. i was snickering at the part where zack was making fun of wren's initials. people like that usually annoy me so i assume zack would've pissed me off by then, but he's a cutie so aye.

all in all good start!

Cant wait to read more!!

@ CeeSilv
Thank you! We appreciate it so much!

"I think you're seeking advice from the wrong author" - I am in love with that line. It was perfect.

Also perfect? This story. I'm loving it so far. The writing is great and refreshing and the characters are so realistic and relatable.

Keep it going, girls - can't wait for more!

Also, I love that Wren loves musical theatre. She and I should be best friends ;)

I'm glad Wren gave Zacky a semi chance to hang out and such :) very cute update!

I'm loving this. I'm in total agreement with @Altair Ibn-La'Ahad; you're both excellent writers. Please update soon xx

May I say that both of you guys are brilliant writers? Honestly. I've been looking forward to this and neither of you disappointed. Being more of a Zacky fan myself, I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen with him and Wren. But, I'm just excited for the whole story in general. Good job, guys. (:

Love your style in writing :) can't wait to read more