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  • inactivebob

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    I absolutely love this story and because of that, you need to update this business. You can't leave me hanging like this. Not after I devoured all eight chapters. Please, please, please. Update. :)
    November 17th, 2014 at 07:03am
  • bxgurl95

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    I hate the fact that the worse it gets for her, the closer she gets to Riley BUT I love that she's getting closer to Riley ! This is so so so so good and I can't wait for more.
    September 29th, 2014 at 02:44am
  • bxgurl95

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    Update pleaseeeeee?
    September 28th, 2014 at 05:02am
  • rains.in.spain

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    ASDFGHJKSDK just found your story, still reading it, love it, subscribed, recommended it :D
    It's hard for me to find stories that are well-written online and I also happen to be very picky so I'm so glad to have found a story I can just get lost in ^.^
    June 5th, 2014 at 03:57am
  • kat456

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    I just found this story and I'm already obsessed with it! it's just amazing!! I love everything about it, the tone, the characters, the lines, everything.
    Can't wait to see how their relationship will develop and where you'll take the story.
    It'd be really interesting to see Riley's POV in the future.
    Can't wait for more!!!
    :)
    May 29th, 2014 at 05:44am
  • Red The Small

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    beautiful chapter!
    May 27th, 2014 at 01:56am
  • saeglopur

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    I really enjoyed reading these chapters. I think this is an interesting take on the teacher/student romance. I love the characters and how they always meet at the coffee shop and its very cute. i can't wait for more.
    May 25th, 2014 at 06:44am
  • bxgurl95

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    Their relationship is so bizarre but I love it. You're description is just amazing!!!! AHHH
    May 25th, 2014 at 01:20am
  • Twinny

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    I'm absolutely in love with this story!! Update soon, please!
    May 16th, 2014 at 09:57pm
  • bxgurl95

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    YESSSSSSSSSSS maybe she have a bit of happiness of her life for once. I can't tell you how much I love this story, and in so glad that more people are commenting now.
    May 16th, 2014 at 03:31pm
  • southpaw

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    This is really great! You paint the images so perfectly in my mind with your vivid descriptions, and both Harper and Riley leap off the page/screen/whatever since they're so well-written and rounded. I love the slow buildup of their relationship - you're doing really well at making it suspenseful and fulfilling at the same time, and I can't wait to read what happens to them next! :)
    May 15th, 2014 at 11:28pm
  • Jayda Something

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    I adore this! Seriously, I am really enjoying this story and I'm glad the last update is recent so I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. Keep them coming I am loving it :D
    May 15th, 2014 at 09:35pm
  • Kuro0105

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    Awesome! I love this story and I just discovered it and read it!
    It is well written and so full of love. I love your Characters and the length of each chapter!

    I am really looking forward to the new chapter! :D
    May 9th, 2014 at 11:05am
  • manny99

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    I just started reading this today and I love it. I can't wait for the next update
    May 8th, 2014 at 04:03am
  • Catharine.

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    I quite like this. :) College relationships with teachers don't really matter much though. Everyone is adult and whatnot. They should do it. lol
    May 7th, 2014 at 09:42am
  • bxgurl95

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    Yay a people commenting !!!!!!!!!!!
    She's not a fool he just doesn't want to risk it at the moment. May I ask what made you decide to include the outfits? Do you normally?
    May 7th, 2014 at 06:16am
  • restlessheart

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    I am totally loving this story!
    May 7th, 2014 at 01:04am
  • Call_me_Dot

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    This seems like such an interesting story (:
    May 7th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • MarizFloriz

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    Everything about this is perfeeeeect
    May 6th, 2014 at 11:59pm
  • Amber;

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    You're story definitely doesn't suck, I just discovered it this morning and already love it! Also, I may or may not have gotten all excited when you mentioned City and Colour-- Dallas Green is absolutely amazing and has the voice of an angel haha. AND I'M SO EXCITED THAT YOU USED SEBASTIAN STAN AS RILEY'S CHARACTER BECAUSE THAT MAN IS SO ATTRACTIVE OH MY GOODNESS.

    I love that you created a character that some of us can empathize with, I feel Harper's pain when it comes to having anxiety and you did a great job describing a mental disorder without totally glorifying/romanticizing it. I hope her father gets what's coming to him, abuse of any type is horrible and I hope someone stands up to him before he does something really bad. I'm glad that Harper is starting to open up to Riley, but I just hope he doesn't continue to pressure her about everything because that could probably cause her to shut him out (even though it seems like she already has) :\

    And I can't believe he just blew her off like that after they almost kissed! I mean, I get where he's coming from and everything, but I just feel so bad for Harper because she really liked him and ugh :( I hope Riley gets a chance to explain himself and I hope Riley understands whatever his reason might be. Getting rejected can feel really terrible-- my heart goes out to Riley :(

    Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work! :)
    May 6th, 2014 at 07:15pm