Swept Away - Comments

I need more please update soon I love your story <3

You're literally my favorite person right now!!
He clearly has some emotion he needs to let out and if he finds out that it's her dad he's gonna flip. He's got that territorial thing going on ;) can't wait for more

Why thank you :) and I'll comment 10 times if I have!!
Clearly Riley is as intriguing to her as she is to him but she's obviously not going to allow herself to give in that easily especially with her home life in such disarray.
I love the pop of color in this outfit

I don't know what to say this story is absolutely fantastic already. You're use of language to contextualize the plot is absolutely brilliant. I actually get swept away in the story and don't want to stop reading. I was thinking myself when Riley called her peculiar that she must seem like an enigma to him. Honestly I can tell this is going to be one of my favorites and I need more people to read this!!
And I love how she's still dressed I'm all black lol give her an even greater air of mystery. And I love that your updates are long AND that so far it didn't take you 3 years to update lol

Yes love the clothes component as well!
Keep keep keep!!! There is so much potential with this one especially because it's an OC story.

Really good start :) Can't wait for more:)