Hell Above - Comments

@ JamieAllOver.
I was worried I didn't make him appear as dickish as I wanted
But yea no the only big city i've been to is las Vegas and it wasn't to go to a hospital so ~~

jack is kinda being a dIck ugh he needa chill
but yee why wouldn't they have parking garages??
i know they do in mass so i mean

@ JamieAllOver.
yea duh
figured i'd jump on that too
besides couldn't u picture him in purple scrubs
bc i can

@ Katiemacx14
LOVE WHEN U COMMENT THANK U

is jordan jordan w
did thar make sense
oh well
but fUckin

AWH DAMN AWH DAMN AWH DAMN YAY YOU UPDATED BUT AWH DAMN

LOVE WHEN YOU UPDATE

update soon

Take all the time you need!! :-) new chapters always worth the wait!

@ Allisond
there's still like 20+ chapters to this dear lord

Yay updates and a sequel!!

@ JamieAllOver.
Not like months just possible a month, singular
Don't worry man

@ JagkBarafag
Aw thank you <3

what do u mean months
that's like
a long time
the heck

God I love this so much and how you write unfffff it's perfection <3

I totally understand what you mean. Just because you have a big idea and a plan of how to do it, when you actually try it, nothing really seems to match what you planned. I think you are doing a great job with this.

@ Butterflyprincess2
Ha, strange I hadn't even considered most of that. I'm really glad you like this so much and can read into it so well, cause mostly I have ideas of what I want to come across and then I get to writing (usually v quick and rushed and I obviously don't proofread it) and I feel like a lot of what I intend to come across in it doesn't actually. Also, I feel like I sort of skipped too much between this chapter and the last, but it will all come out eventually. So no, thank you lots for your super long in depth comment! It makes me really happy, and I promise I'll try and update soon (hopefully within this week or so)! x

Oh dear goodness gracious. You had me in suspense at the end of chapter 30, and I was expecting chaos and pain, but not this. I am not even referring to his contemplated suicide, because, honestly, Alex is very fragile and Jack has been keeping him together as best as he can but with something like what Alex went through he was going to break.

I had prepared for a broken Alex to come home to a very concerned Jack, and Alex to do something stupid and self destructive, and Jack to do what he can to fix it. Instead I am left in more suspense while I wait for a concerned Jack to come home to find a completely shattered, unconscious, and beaten Alex on the bathroom floor surrounded by pills. You created more suspense.

Keep in mind that I love this story. I am not even going to apologize for this being so long.

@ Gaskarthloveme
Thank you!! I'll try to!

OMG I was so fucking terrified that he would swallow those pills, man. Like holy titty fuck. I honestly like fucking love this story a lot so I hope you update soon