Hell Above - Comments

@ der4nged
I hope!! update soonnn

@ scre4mtobeh3ard
It'll be okay!!

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
It makes sense! Haha thank you (-:

WHAT noooooo

Oh shit.
I can't think of anything better but
Oh shit!
I promise, my thoughts of this story are all wonderful,
But I can't form sentences except the fact that
Alex wanted to swallow those pills....

This makes no sense, I realize.

u know how some people are "grammar nazis"
95% of the time i am grammar hitler
i'm only not during like comments and messages and stuff
unless i feel like i should use perf grammar then i do but usually nah

@ Katiemacx14
Yay! Stay excited! There's still so much of this story I promise!

@ JamieAllOver.
I only use run on sentences man like its okay I promise this isn't the fcat or anything

it's okay?????
more than half of them had to do with commas and shit so it's not a big deal i doubt anyone else noticed i'm just picky

IM SO EXCITED I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCB WOW

@ JamieAllOver.
i'm sorry??

well that doesn't help me much

@ JamieAllOver.
sorta but then i'd feel inclined to fix them so

i cAN'T HELP IT
do u rlly wanna know

@ JamieAllOver.
dude DUDE no
no actually what are they

well nO ACTUALLY IM NOT YOU ALMOST HAD HIM COMMIT SUICIDE R U KIDDING ME NO THAT'S NOT OKAY
and if u rlly wanna get into it i saw a few other mistakes but whateves

@ JamieAllOver.
I FIXED IT ARE YOU HAPPy???

@ JamieAllOver.
you're just here to ruin my day aren't you

okay just a quick note so i don't forget but i don't think a wince is a noise?? idk maybe i'm wrong bc wouldn't be the first time but i thought a wince was like a physical action??

@ Allisond
bad things!