A Rhapsody of Sorts - Comments

oh my god Oliver's mom help i'm cRYING
also i will have you know that my heart is a mess right now, WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS OH GOD
and i sincerely hope that things with Belinda and Liam will work out and there won't be too much fretting (although with Belinda, i highly doubt that and with Liam, not as much) ((((:

Ahhhhhhhhhh you can't end the chapter there!!!!! Update update update!!!
I want to know what happens. How she deals and what Liam and Belinda will do/say.
Update super soon please

I'm sure your absolutely swamped with college stuff now because I am too but after reading this update I NEED another one. Now that you've brought all the characters to this standstill I have no idea what each one is going to do next. What does Harry mean by "really be friends" and how long is that going to last? Can't wait for more!

correction: a bunch of shitty mistakes but whatevs

OKAY
I LOVE HER MOM
LIKE, YES SHE CARES THAT HER DAUGHTER KEEPS THINGS FROM HER
BUT SHE ALSO KNOWS THAT OLIVER IS A GROWN WOMAN WHO WILL SAY THINGS ON HER OWN TIME
AND SHE RESPECTS THE PRIVACY OF HER DAUGHTER WITHOUT GETTING ANGRY OR UPSET OR BUTTHURT

and also i'm just a tiny bit (all right a big bit) pissed at Oliver for just telling her mom that there's nothing going on with Harry and that he's just some boy becAUSE HE ISN'T
HONESTLY, HE CHANGED HER LIFE. HE TURNED IT AROUND, AND NOW SHE'S RETREATING BACK TO HER COCOON OF LIAM AND GIO AND HER FAMILY AND SHE'S TRYING TO KEEP HARRY OUT OF ALL THIS BULLSHIT BUT IT'S TOO LATE
HE IS HER FAMILY
HE IS A PART OF HER AND SHE CAN'T ESCAPE THAT NO MATTER HOW MUCH SHE HURTS HIM
it's just not fair to him to say that he's just some boy because he affected her life, yes, but she also changed his and it's like she's just disrespecting and taking back everything she's ever done for/to him, both good and bad
she can't just erase their relationship because it's more than just some silly boy-girl-lovey-dovey story, fuck that
they were each others Persons (and i don't watch Grey's Anatomy but i DO know that someone's Person is extremely significant and is probably the utmost honorable position one can hold in another's life)
THEY WERE SO COMPATIBLE
AND I'M NOT TALKING ABOUT THAT DUMBASS, "O U LIKE CHERRIES ME TOO WOW LET'S DATE BC WE'D BE GR8 TOGETHER WE CAN GO CHERRY PICKING ON THE WEEKENDS AND MAKE CHERRY PIE SOMEDAY"
they were just
THEY WEREN'T PERFECT TOGETHER.
THEY WERE HUMAN TOGETHER. AND ISN'T THAT WHAT WE'RE ALL TRYING TO FIND HERE? SOMEONE WE CAN BE 100% HUMAN WITH?
and Oliver's just throwing it all away because of one shitty mistake

god dammit this story does things to me (i.e. unleashes the ranting monster within)

AND SYDNEY EVEN KNOWS IT
SYDNEY
EVEN
KNOWS IT.
it's like by denying Harry the right to have SOME position of importance in her life, she's losing her own significance and she's losing bits of herself because they're all intertwined with Harry

TRUTH
YOU TELL HER, HARRY
SOMEONE NEEDS TO SAY IT AND IT'S EVEN BETTER THAT SOMEONE IS YOU

NO
DON'T TELL HARRY TO STOP BECAUSE YOU NEED TO KNOW THIS
YOU ARE MORE THAN JUST YOU
YOU ARE A PIECE IN SO MANY OTHER PEOPLE'S LIVES AND YOU NEED TO ACKNOWLEDGE THAT AND PLAY THAT ROLE BECAUSE IF THEY DON'T DESERVE THAT MUCH, YOU DO.

YES
YES, HARRY, YES!
DON'T BE DONE WITH HER!
PUT UP A FIGHT!

i'm sad that Harry's locked away his heart but i think it's good for them
having sex was kinda obviously the turning point in their relationship and while i think it's going to be hard to just forget that, i'm glad they're going back to basics because just as they've crashed, they need to rebuild (:

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME YOU DICKLIN FUCKTARD
NO
YOU DON'T GET TO SAY THAT
I'M SO PISSED OFF
I REALLY WANT SHIT TO GO DOWN WITH FRANKLIN SHITTURD OH GOD I HATE THIS FUCKER
look at me, you made me swear so much :((((

anywho
i've gotten to the point where i want to sympathize with Rose, i really do, but sometimes, she makes it so difficult
i understand that it's in her nature to push people away–it's her history, it's all part of her, but i just wish she could maybe let go of her past just a little bit at a time so she can be more free and open (if only it were that easy)
because pushing away Harry, the closest of her friends and also the one who knows the most about her yet has known her for the shortest period of time, is heart-wrenching, honestly
when it comes down to reality, this is a work of fiction, of course, but it's so real to the point where i can hardly control my emotions. it's so difficult when Rose and Harry are such dynamic characters and people and i just uGH okay off to read ch. 27 pls forgive the rant as usual

this was a fantastic chapter oh my god. but honestly i don't think i can handle them being just friends now..

MY LOVE FOR THIS STORY IS NEVER ENDING PAL wow where do i even start????? Fucking rose's characterisation is ON. POINT. I love how you weave in really subtle but really important messages (about slut shaming, cat calling, general feminism etc), and I love that Harry's got like a subtle crush on her but they're actually addressing rose's issues before all of the relationship stuff u know??? So in love w this please continue to be flawless in every aspect

Brilliant! I'm simultaneously excited and scared for the next chapter. Great character development. Great story. Great everything. I'm done.

As soon as he showed her that his secret was the piano I knew she was going to kiss him! I'm nervous for whatever plot twist you're going to throw in now that they've crossed all friendship boundaries.. Cannot believe you're making us wait a whole week for another update after this one!

OH MY GOD ROSE!
YOU'RE CHOOSING TO STAY WITH HARRY! (i almost wrote satay hehehe oops)
YES YES YES THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS PROGRESSING LET THERE BE LIGHT AHHHHHHH HALLELUJAH
SO PROUD OF ROSE FOR TAKING THIS STEP
OOOOOH SNAP
"BUT THIS BOY, THIS ANNOYING, VULNERABLE TEENAGE BOY" DON'T THINK I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT ;))))
OH MY GOD
THEY HAD SEX I'M CRYING
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I'M FREAKING OUT HOLY SHIT
however, i'm very worried about whether or not things'll change between them, because this is HUGE

also can we please talk about your a/n like honestly
you treat us like we're so much more than just your readers and i just ugh okay i cannot begin to talk about how touching that a/n was because yes, stories include that and it's (hopefully) implied that the author doesn't want anyone to go through that, but you just uGH I LOVE YOU THAT IS ALL

also can we please talk about your a/n like honestly
you treat us like we're so much more than just your readers and i just ugh okay i cannot begin to talk about how touching that a/n was because yes, stories include that and it's (hopefully) implied that the author doesn't want anyone to go through that, but you just uGH I LOVE YOU THAT IS ALL

also can we please talk about your a/n like honestly
you treat us like we're so much more than just your readers and i just ugh okay i cannot begin to talk about how touching that a/n was because yes, stories include that and it's (hopefully) implied that the author doesn't want anyone to go through that, but you just uGH I LOVE YOU THAT IS ALL

AHHHHH OH MY GOD ROSE KISSED HARRY!
SHE KISSED HARRY!
R O S E KISSED H A R R Y, HOLY SHIT?!
sorry, no deep comment rn bc i'm tryna read all these updates i missed ;))))) but hopefully i can manage one once i'm done with all three!

FUCK YEAH FINALLY YAAAAAAS IM SO STOKED

woops sorry for the double post!

really really good chapter :)! i feel like there was a bit more insight to what rose is feeling too! i can't wait for the next update

really really good chapter :)! i feel like there was a bit more insight to what rose is feeling too! i can't wait for the next update

is it weird that this chapter made me cry?