June 5th, 2014 at 05:14pm
I really like the quote in the summary. It's very inspiring especially for writers. The layout is very unique which is a good thing, and I think that is one of the best ways to describe.
The online writing world was at war... This is a very strong way to open a story, and it really works for this piece. Of course, strong openers for stories are always something that keeps me interested.
It's unique how you made the websites a person. It's something out there, but it is still believable. I know that is really hard to do, and I think a 'congrats' are in order for doing just that.
I love the interactions with the three. It's very interesting. Overall, I think this is a very well-written story that is sure to stick out in a good way.
I also really like that the 'writing war' is resolved in such a sweet and relatively non-violent way. I'm definitely of the opinion that everyone from other sites should stop arguing because we're all on writing sites to do one simple thing - write. Sure, we have our own preferences but as you said in that wonderful little speech that Mibba made, we're on the sites to share a tiny part of our soul and that's exactly what everyone should focus on.
This is well-written, and the entirety of the story is fairly sweet. Lovely job!