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  • Lollipopstrings

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    Oh my gawddd, I love this story! It's incredibly well written and gives me hope for the future of fan fiction. I definitely subbed because this story is the bombbbbbb Mr. Green
    May 28th, 2014 at 10:01am
  • andreaface13

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    I love this story. There are a lot of stories out there that are so cheesy and fake sounding that I can barely get through a chapter but your got me hooked I can't wait for the next update thank you❤️❤️❤️
    May 28th, 2014 at 05:33am
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    I love this story. There are a lot of stories out there that are so cheesy and fake sounding that I can barely get through a chapter but your got me hooked I can't wait for the next update thank you❤️❤️❤️
    May 28th, 2014 at 05:32am
  • akmo4725

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    Alright I've been gone awhile at a three day music festival!!!

    Omg they got engaged!!! I totally fucking called it!!
    Brian finally metthe family! I'm glad they all ended up liking him!! I think goingn with the flow for the birth control was a good choice! They want to be together forever so why wait!

    I still don't see the big deal on her relationship with Brian, because she waited until after he wasn't her patient. But oh well who cares!! She got her soulmate and now she is also pregnant!!!!
    May 27th, 2014 at 05:29pm
  • AJ9

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    Gavin seems to be coming round a bit but I'm not sure if the pregnancy may set him back a little. I hope he can accept it though. I'm glad Brian's way is working out. Kara is being so supportive. I really love these two Cute

    Please update again soon. As soon as you possibly can. Xxxxx
    May 27th, 2014 at 10:27am
  • synystergirl

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    Sorry - don't know why my comment posted twice!
    May 27th, 2014 at 07:48am
  • synystergirl

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    Great chapter - I feel so bad for poor Gavin - growing up like he has, no wonder he has so much disrespect towards Brian and Kara, he probably doesn't know if he can trust them. It sounds like he may start coming around though, I sure hope so. Seems like Brians stricter way of dealing with him is working, let's just wait and see. As far as the pregnancy is concerned I think at first he may be a little jealous but hopefully (if he is jealous) it won't take him long to come around.
    May 27th, 2014 at 07:47am
  • synystergirl

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    Great chapter - I feel so bad for poor Gavin - growing up like he has, no wonder he has so much disrespect towards Brian and Kara, he probably doesn't know if he can trust them. It sounds like he may start coming around though, I sure hope so. Seems like Brians stricter way of dealing with him is working, let's just wait and see. As far as the pregnancy is concerned I think at first he may be a little jealous but hopefully (if he is jealous) it won't take him long to come around.
    May 27th, 2014 at 07:47am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Poor Gavin
    No child deserves to see their mother doing that crap
    And all the junk Amanda told him about Brian is messed up
    Brian is doing great
    Gavin will open up to Kara eventually
    I think Gavin will be unsure at first about the baby maybe even act out and pretend he wants nothing to do with him or her but when the baby actually comes he'll be excited to be a big brother
    May 27th, 2014 at 03:04am
  • powerofkisses

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    What is he gonna say about the baby?!?!?!
    May 27th, 2014 at 02:41am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this so much and wow Gavin does like it here, I can't wait to see what the sex is of the baby, I hope it's a girl xxx
    May 27th, 2014 at 01:27am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    May 27th, 2014 at 12:46am
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    @ RyeBellamy
    LOL, glad you liked that Tarzan and Pinkly are bonding! They are cuties! I agree, Heather should be fired, what a bitch! Cheyenne and Kara get to be pregnant together and Matt and Brian get to deal with them at the same time! We'll find out what Amanda wants shortly! Thanks for the comment!

    @ Ca20000
    Yes, Gavin is finally here! We'll probably find out in a couple of chapters if the baby is a boy or a girl, so we'll just have to wait and see. Updating shortly! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

    @ synystergirl
    You know how I love to write cliffhangers Wink I agree, it's not fair that Kara lost her job. Maybe it was just a blessing in disguise though. Kara and Cheyenne will definitely share some mommy-to-be time in the future. I'm sure Papa Gates will get to provide his explicit input in detail Very Happy We'll find out what happens shortly! Thanks for reading and providing feedback!

    @ Aightball
    No worries! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the story! I agree! Kara could totally turn her in and fight to get her job back if she really wanted to.

    @ KillJoySynner
    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! There will plenty more excitement to come!

    @ powerofkisses
    You don't have to wait much longer! Thanks for reading and continuing to support the story!

    @ AJ9
    Ohhhh..... there is going to be SO much drama! And yay for her finally being preggers! Heather is an idiot and we'll see in the future if she gets what she deserves. Thanks for continuing to follow the story! Posting next chapter now!
    May 27th, 2014 at 12:43am
  • RyeBellamy

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    haha ok, first..i love that tarzan and pinkly finally became friends..how adorable are they? really! :3

    fucking bitch heather needs to be fired!

    and awww matt's wife is pregnant too!! hahaha thatis soo cute..brian and matt will share experience of daddy to be..awww Mr. Green

    and oh my god amanda showed up!! i hope she doesnt want brian back! greaaat update love! i love every bit of it! <3 Very Happy
    May 26th, 2014 at 03:56pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Wow so Gavin is there and Brian will get to see him and I am so glad she is pregnant and I hope he gets a girl, wonder what's going to happen please update soon xxx
    May 26th, 2014 at 08:47am
  • synystergirl

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    OMG You're horrible ending this chapter there!! LOL - I don't think it was fair at all that Kara lost her job. It's been quite a while since Brian was in the hospital - Heather is a bitch!!!! Wow, Kara and Cheyenne both pregnant!!! At least they each have someone to talk to about everything that is happening during their pregnancies. Talk about emotional stress!! Papa Gates sure is maaaad! Did she just leave Gavin there? Oh man, I can't wait to read more!!! Great job
    May 26th, 2014 at 07:09am
  • Aightball

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    Been a silent reader, but I have to say: Kara got bullied out her job the same as I got bullied out of my hospital job. I think she's got ever right to turn that bitch in and sue to get her job back. She broke the rules, yes, but a bully shouldn't be calling the shot.
    May 26th, 2014 at 06:19am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Awesome! Just got caught up with the recent chapter and I freaking love it! Excited for more:D
    May 26th, 2014 at 05:58am
  • powerofkisses

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    OH SNAP! I'm excited to see what's gonna happen
    May 26th, 2014 at 01:58am
  • AJ9

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    First off, I don't think it's fair of her to lose her job and I hope heather gets fired too for being an incompetent knob head. She's too smug for her own good and she needs bringing down. Secondly, I'm so glad she's pregnant. I love Brian's reaction. Thirdly, I'm so looking forward to the drama that's gonna go down surrounding Gavin's appearance. Can't wait for more of this, so please update again soon. Xxx Mr. Green
    May 26th, 2014 at 01:47am