Save Me - Comments

my god that smut is hottt! u are awesome! hahaah and even her mom cant resist brian huh? hahaha XD

At first I thought her mum would be a total bitch, but I'm liking her so far. I hope it stays that way though. Please update again soon. Xx

Haha Kara's mom is just excited that her daughter is happy and found someone!! The man is gorgeous and successful hello?!?! I love how much Brian and Kara love each other! Brian bringing up marriage and babies is adorable!!! I can't wait until she is pregnant!!! They will make amazing babies!! Maybe she will be pregnant when he goes on tour bc birth control isn't always effective!! I hope so fingers crossed!! He can propose too!!! I love this story!!! Can't wait for more!!

Hey sorry I didn't comment last time but I was away anyway I live this and kara's mum seems to like Brian please update soon xxxxxxxx

Geez - her mom needs to calm down with all the questions. Especially about Kara's sex life. I do think though that her mom will approve but it seems she already does. That comment about him being gorgeous made me crack up!! She is right of course!! Another great chapter and can't wait for more

Aww. I feel like this is what my mother is like :) a great update. I would like to see her family's reactions to him.

@ synystergirl
Thanks for the compliments . I don't know how or when the rest of the guys find out about Gavin, but sooner or later they will find out. I'm glad you could see both sides of the issue, I was really hoping that I didn't portray either one of them as being wrong. Posting the next chapter momentarily!

@ AJ9
I agree, I think Brian should have confided in Kara in the first place as well. She was just so upset that after everything they had established in the relationship that he could hide something so big from her. Theresa will come up again at some point in the story and the issue of her opening her mouth to Kara will come to light. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback!

@ RyeBellamy
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! We'll see how Brian's son affects the relationship somewhere in the future. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

@ amanduh
Gavin will come into play somewhere in the future. I won't say where but it won't be immediate I'm glad it was as big of a twist as I had hoped and that it caught everyone off guard. Posting more in a few minutes!

@ rachthebat.
Yes, let's clone him twice! And every once in a while we can lend ours to each other and then we can have both

Like I said before, I'm so glad that Gavin was such a shocker to everyone. I really tried not to give any hints away earlier on in the story He will come into play sometime in the future, but I'll never tell when

There will definitely be a conversation between Theresa and Brian in the chapter after the next one that I'm about to post.

I'm glad you liked all of the smexiness! I LOVED all of your little video snippets too!

Thanks so much for the feedback!

@ akmo4725
I'm happy to hear that you're still liking the flow of their relationship! There will be more in the future about Gavin and Brian will confront Theresa in the chapter after the next that I'm about to post. We'll have to see about Kara becoming pregnant, I'm not giving anything away just yet Thanks so much for continuing to read and comment!

@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline
I agree COMPLETELY. I don't think Theresa really had a right to say anything, nothing good can come when you assume! Glad you're still enjoying it! Posting more in a few minutes!

@ powerofkisses
Thanks so much! I tried to fill that one to the brim with all kinds of fun Posting more now! Thanks for continuing to read and share your thoughts!

Holy shit - talk about skeletons in the closet, didn't see that one coming. I think Brian would make a great dad and I hope he gets the chance. I can understand how Kara got so mad - this was a big secret but I can also see Brian's side of it too. He wasn't sure how much in love with him Kara was and was unsure of bringing it up. I'm glad it's out now and I can't wait until the rest of the guys find out. Talk about hot sex, damn girl, you rock with that stuff!!!!

I loved this! Hot and sexy . I hope that Gavin does make an appearance, I'd like to see Brian be a dad to his son, but only if he stays with kara. Also, I'm not sure about Theresa really, I don't think it was her place to tell about Gavin. She's lucky Brian didn't fire her. Hasn't she heard of confidentiality? Brian needs to have a talk with her and warn her about keeping quiet about his affairs. Having said that though, I think Brian should've confided in kara. She was right to be mad. I think I'd've heard him out before leaving though, but whatever. Everyone acts differently. I can't wait to find out what else is in store. Please update again soon. Xxx

yeahhh goddamn baby! that was freaking hot! hot! hot! both of smuts! and about brian has a son..thats a genius twist! makes the relationship evenmore interesting than it already is! loveee it!

I so hope Gavin's going to be a part of Brian (and Kara's) life some time soon! Didn't expect for him to have a son and that not many people knew about it, but it's a nice detail for this story :)

Damn, I think I need a cigarette just reading that




And Brian...



Jesus H Christ, I need to go stick my head out of the window and cool down!

In fact

....

Nope, still too hot!



Can we clone him and each have a version? Holy cheesepuffs!

And my jaw just dropped to the floor...HE HAS A SON?! You think he might have mentioned that..XD I don't blame Theresa at all, she probably thought that he'd already told her, seeing how close they're becoming. And to be fair to Brian, he didn't exactly lie about it, he just didn't tell her..haha. That doesn't make it any better, he should have told her, but I can understand why he wouldn't. He didn't want to risk losing her.

I can even understand his reaction to Theresa, he's upset, scared out of his wits that he'd never going to see Kara again, he's just not thinking.

Oh thank god!!!! I've never felt so relieved! Poor Brian :( I want to jump in and hug him and maybe let him between my thighs, too ehehehe.

I'd love for Gavin to be a part of his life, to see him become a dad to the little boy, it would be adorable!

Okay, seriously, these ovaries of mine cannot handle making love sex and make up sex, it's too much, my body cannot handle it

I think I just need to go lie down in a dark room.

@ NeverWakeMeUp
I'm so freaking flattered girly!!! Their relationship is moving perfectly to me and where the hell can I find this version of Brian hahaha!!! You better be updating soon love!

We'll holy fuck you didn't disappoint!!! Sex was incredibly hot!! I feel bad for Theresa she didn't mean it, hopefully Brian said it in the heat of the moment! I would have reacted the same way, but I'm so glad he called jimmy then went after Kara to explain things and that she stopped and listened!!! YES the ly finally said I love you!! Their relationship is turning out so amazing!! They are a forever couple I feel it!! Fate! I think she is going to end up pregnant eventually! I kinda hope Gavin comes into play but who knows!! I'm just so in love with Kara and Brian and how happy she makes him!! Can't wait for the next update!

Holy shit. I didn't expect that at all! I don't think Theresa had the right to say it but he should have told her before. They're such a cute couple though, I love them. Kara has the patience of a saint to be dealing with him xD

So much in chapter! ;) totally loved it. Can't wait for more!!

@ rachthebat.
LOLOLOL

I've been typing away all morning and I'm getting ready to post the next chapter now. All I can say is....... I feel like I need one of these

Brian definitely has a way of proving a point! I know I've said it before, but can I please have this version of him in real life?

I want Ray as my new best friend too! I feel like he would be awesome to have around on a regular basis.

There will definitely be skeletons in the next chapter, I'll let you decide if you think they're bad or not.

More is on it's way in a few minutes!!!

@ synystarr
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! More coming now!

@ AJ9
Updating now! (You may want to get the cold water running ahead of time though ) Thanks for the comment!

@ synystergirl
There's definitely skeletons and drama in the chapter I'm about to post. As for Kara's skeletons, we'll have to wait and see if there's any and what they are! What's on the other side of the cliff will be up momentarily!

@ akmo4725
Thanks so much for the sweet comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the way that they established their relationship, I was thinking of you while I wrote it Skeletons and drama coming up! Next chapter will be up in a minute!

@ uniqueluver20
Thanks so much for letting me know! Next chapter being posted now!

@ powerofkisses
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feed back! Posting more now!

@ RyeBellamy
Johnny's sneaky video shoot will come into play somewhere in the future I'm glad you liked the dynamic between the girls! Hopefully they will all continue to get along nicely

@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline
Ray is the best! Posting more right now so we can find out what's on the other side of that cliff!

You'd better be tapping away at your keyboard right now missy!



Johnny Christ on a bike, that last sentence What a way to announce that she was his girlfriend, by rubbing his morning wood all over her. I can't help but love him, though

He's cocky and sexy and swoonyworthy and a perfect gentleman, all rolled into one, how could I not love this man?

Also, I want a Ray as my new best friend! XD

I don't think there are necessarily bad skeletons in his closet, but I'm just waiting for an ex girlfriend or ex floozy to rock up and try to spoil what they have. I hope not, but I do like the drama!

MORE, I NEED MOREEEEE

Loving this

Just update again already!! . Ugh, I need a cold shower after that now, lol.

Seriously though, please update again soon. Xxx