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  • synystergirl

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    #$%%#$(@ - what a cliffhanger!!! They are so cute together - perfect couple. I hope nothing comes out to ruin it - but a little drama couldn't hurt. Wonder if there are any skeletons in Kara's closet and I hope there aren't too many bad ones in Brian's. As always, another great chapter and ready for the next one.
    May 17th, 2014 at 06:16am
  • akmo4725

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    Oh yeah!! Finally they are an official couple!!! So happy!!! Still love Ray too!!
    May 17th, 2014 at 04:39am
  • akmo4725

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    Damnit lol!!!! Nice little cliffhanger you just gave there!! I think skeletons may come out, but I think she will expect them I mean he is a rock star! As long as he is faithful to her now!! The girls get along great with her!!! I could not agree more with what they all said! Pretty much Kara is his soulmate!!!! I love the playfulness, and also the sweet banter they have going on with each other! Johnny is such a little shit! However that would be a cute pic to have of each other!! I really need this next update soon! Especially where this night is heading!!! I love this story and Kara and Brian together is perfect!! She is his one!!! I love the length of your chapters! Makes me feel like it's not over too soon like most stories I read! I don't wanna put it down! Can't wait for more Cool
    May 17th, 2014 at 04:38am
  • uniqueluver20

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    I love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next
    May 17th, 2014 at 03:45am
  • powerofkisses

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    NOOOOOOOOO! Awesome update!
    May 17th, 2014 at 01:41am
  • RyeBellamy

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    oh mann..the cliffhanger! i dont mind the lengthhh please continuee!!
    hhaha sneaky lil bastard that's what johnny is..hahaha is he gonna publish that photo somewhere? lol

    oh im glad the girls are supporting and none of them really talk bad about their realtionship..makes kara feels more secure..love that! and i cant waitt for the next update! pleasee update soon!!
    May 17th, 2014 at 12:11am
  • YourLoveIsMyLifeline

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    Ugh that cliffhanger. I love Ray, it's hard not to love Ray.
    May 16th, 2014 at 10:26pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ rachthebat. @ akmo4725 @ xmissjajiaix @ synystergirl @ powerofkisses @ RyeBellamy @ AJ9 @ pekigirl @ Ca20000

    Sorry I didn't get to reply to everyone individually this time but I'm super busy and I have the next chapter ready to post quickly but I don't have time for individual replies right this second (however I will try to get to them later tonight if I get a chance)! Thanks to all of you for the supersweet comments! You guys are the best! To those of you who said that the only thing you hate is when the chapter ends and there's no more, I'm sorry because you're really going to hate me with the chapter I'm about to post! I'm glad you've all enjoyed the sweetness of their relationship, but be prepared for this story to start heating up!! Love you all!Arms
    May 16th, 2014 at 09:56pm
  • heretic.

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    Tarzan is gorgeous!

    Chapter 4 had me grinning like an absolute idiot the whole way through, I loved it! I'm so glad she decided to give him a chance and go and see him!

    I love Ray too, he's a peach tehe

    The little date was perfect, who needs expensive restaurants and fancy dinners when you can have just as much fun, if not more, at a pizza place with an arcade! :D

    I like that he's being a gentleman and taking his time with her, he could have just used those rock star looks and swayed her into bed, but he didn't and I love that. It's really sweet.

    Now onto the next chapter! :D

    i love Papa Gates! lmfao oh my god, that man!

    “Holy Hell, it’s a fucking housecat on steroids,” lmfao hahahaha. I hope Tarzan kicks him in the nuts for that XD

    “Yeah, for a fucking baby cheetah,” XD I actually love that he called his dog Pinkly, it's adorable.

    I've ALWAYS wanted to do that, kiss my boyfriend in the rain but he just refuses to comply with me. XD And U've just had to turn my little desk fan on cause that kiss, PHEW! Swoon

    I agree with synystergirl - The only thing I hate is getting to the end of the chapter, cause I get so engrossed in them tehe
    May 16th, 2014 at 09:28pm
  • akmo4725

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    Gah papa gates had me rolling!!! He is so perfect in this story!!! Brian is so perfect with Kara!! I think you are pacing this pretty good!! It's not dragging and it's not going fast! Perfect!!! Papa gates embarrassing Brian like that at the club was cute!!! So are they boyfriend and girlfriend yet or will they have that talk?!? The kissing in the rain was perfect just like their blooming relationship! I can't wait for the next chapter or when she goes to the bands houses! I can just picture Jimmy lol or the other girls!!! Update soon!!!
    May 16th, 2014 at 09:33am
  • xmissjajiaix

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    Oh goodness, I can't handle all this! I love them together so much! :) Can't wait for more!
    May 16th, 2014 at 05:45am
  • synystergirl

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    Love this story - as I do all your other ones. As I've told you before you are such an awesome writer!! The only thing I don't like is coming to the end of a chapter and there's not another one posted!!! LOL. Can't wait to read more
    May 16th, 2014 at 02:00am
  • powerofkisses

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    I think it's perfect. I like stories like this that don't rush into sex. It builds it up. I can't wait for more!
    May 16th, 2014 at 01:44am
  • RyeBellamy

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    ohhh mannnn they kissed! this whole chapter is sweet! this chaoter is my favorite!! in fact this story is!! i love it soo much! pls update moree! Very Happy
    May 16th, 2014 at 01:13am
  • AJ9

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    I just love this so much. I think the pace is about right. I just can't wait till they see each other again. Please update again soon. Xxx Mr. Green
    May 16th, 2014 at 12:11am
  • pekigirl

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    omg I feel emotional with this story.. I guess I'm an emotional wreck xD but I just love this story too much! I don't even know what to say. Just awesome!
    May 15th, 2014 at 11:24pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Haha I loved this chapter I loved Brian I loved jars I loved papa area AND I loved pinkly so cute, and so are Brian an Lara can't wait for more please update soon xxxx
    May 15th, 2014 at 09:49pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ xmissjajiaix
    Thank you! I'm glad you really like the characters!

    @ synystergirl
    Thanks for taking the time to read it! I'm glad you like it. Getting ready to post more now!

    @ pekigirl
    You are soo sweet! Thank you so much for the flattery! If this chapter gave you butterflies you'll definitely have more with the next!

    @ Ca20000
    Thanks so much! More to come soon!

    @ AJ9
    Haha! Your next fix is on it's way!

    @ YourLoveIsMyLifeline
    My pleasure :) Glad you're enjoying it!

    @ akmo4725
    Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you like that I'm not rushing them in to anything. Love that you like Ray and Jimmy so much! I promise the rest of the guys will come into play soon! Thanks for reading!
    May 15th, 2014 at 09:08pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this and so glad he is better, and love those two together please update soon xxxx
    May 15th, 2014 at 05:37pm
  • AJ9

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    I loved this and can't wait for my next fix! Mr. Green please update again soon. Xx
    May 15th, 2014 at 05:31pm