Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

  • punkfiction

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    @ birds ate my face
    LOL, I'm guessing Patrick would probably feel the same way
    June 4th, 2014 at 11:19pm
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    I want to punch Pete's lights out
    June 4th, 2014 at 11:09pm
  • Lozzworthy101

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    Cool Smile Smile
    June 4th, 2014 at 10:55pm
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    @ birds ate my face
    Thank you, (I kinda wanna call you 'bird' for some reason, but I'll refrain Wink). I might slow and put one chapter a day up, give myself time to edit--I usually just write these and post them as-is.

    @ Sinfullyobvious
    LOL, please don't hit me with a mallet. I just put a new chapter up. Thank you for making me feel better. Means a lot that you like it xox

    @ Ali Cat
    Yeah, the sad thing about this fic is that there's no way for everyone to be happy. Someone is going to end up upset, which is hard, because I love them all. :( Thanks for the words Hug

    @ Lozzworthy101
    Haha, I won't!! Thank you so much for that. I needed it. Hug xox

    @ milesandmaisy
    I believe you. Thank you. <3 xox

    I love you ALL. Means a lot that you take the time to comment, especially when I'm being all whiny and depressive. Thanks, bubs. xox
    June 4th, 2014 at 10:50pm
  • milesandmaisy

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    there are not enough words to express how much I love this story. I would not continue to read it with such enthusiasm if I thought it was suffering or the writing was bad. just trust me on this.
    June 4th, 2014 at 07:27pm
  • Lozzworthy101

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    My god don't go on a hiatus I think i'd die! Your story is going perfect, I'm constantly wanting the next chapter and the way you write is brilliant!
    June 4th, 2014 at 07:09pm
  • Ali Cat

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    This story isn't suffering, don't worry! It's still going strong, but I know exactly how that feels. I can't believe Pete called, oh my god, and I know I hate him for everything he's done, but right now my heart hurts for him, and I want him to be happy. But Patrickkk aaaghhh
    June 4th, 2014 at 07:08pm
  • Sinfullyobvious

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    The story is not suffering I will come find you with a mallet if you stop writing. I read probably an unhealthy amount of fanfic and I s2g I'm in love with this and get excited I see it's updated soooo pleaseeeee carry on xxx
    June 4th, 2014 at 06:41pm
  • santi santi

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    It's not bad at all! Just take it slow if you need to, I think you're doing fabulous
    June 4th, 2014 at 04:47pm
  • Dont Panic

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    You're too harsh on yourself, this is one of the best fics I've read in a while :)
    June 4th, 2014 at 02:59pm
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    the patrick sex is so sweet, it's like cupcakes and sprinkles and at the same time hot and amazing.
    June 4th, 2014 at 09:27am
  • sailorapril

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    this is perfect. love it. patrick and pete are both perfectly written, and i'm not sure who i'm rooting for. anna is so lucky to have both those gods fighting for her.
    June 4th, 2014 at 09:27am
  • milesandmaisy

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    holy shit...were we separated at birth? another choice bit that could describe me and my soulmate, who is not, in fact, the person I live with (okay, he's my best friend and not someone who I want to or would have sex with, but still):

    "have you ever connected with someone on so deep a level you feel like you could tell them anything, and they’d never judge you, no matter how crazy or weird or disturbed it was? Like, someone whose mind seems so weirdly in sync with yours it’s almost like you’re the same person? Like once they’re in your life, you can’t really function right without them?”

    amazing.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 11:26pm
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    @ birds ate my face
    That would probably be better for her in the long run. Although, where would she go? Her job is in Chicago, so she'd have to stay there...and it's not like she really has anyone else, which is a lot of the problem.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 11:18pm
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    @ milesandmaisy
    I wanted to write something lighthearted and fun but I guess I just can't bring myself to do it while things are so messed up for all of them. I can't help thinking about Pete (guess I'm like Anna in that respect.) Hoping Christmas will be better, though.

    @ star collision.
    Yeah, Patrick is probably the safe option, although she sincerely loves him. It's just that Pete is kind of a part of her, and I'm not really sure how you just get over something like that. I really try to make things nice but they won't let me! LOL.

    @ KateeJayne
    Haha, yes! Long lost twin time, LMFAO.

    @ khuckles @ birds ate my face
    Yeah, I thought about that, but I couldn't handle the idea of Patrick's face if she'd done that. And it's not like she wishes Patrick were Pete. She loves Patrick for Patrick...but the problem is that he's not Pete. Sigh. Anna, you make life very hard for yourself.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 11:16pm
  • santi santi

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    Honestly I think Anna should get away from the both of them, live her own life and see what the future holds later with the both of them
    June 3rd, 2014 at 11:14pm
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    I thought she was gonna call Pete's name with Patrick, that would've been hurtful and awkward
    June 3rd, 2014 at 10:09pm
  • khuckles

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    Hahah. No hatred here. When I saw the warning in the title, I thought it was going to be something real bad like Anna moaning Pete's name accidentally, or something similiar. Thanks for the update! :-)
    June 3rd, 2014 at 07:16pm
  • Dont Panic

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    I wish there was a way to clone Anna so both Patrick and Pete could have one xD
    June 3rd, 2014 at 06:38pm
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    This story is ruining me. Anna loves him and he loves her but he can never be Pete and ugh. I feel so sorry for everyone. And Anna's dilemma is so difficult. Patrick is the safe option, I suppose. The last couple of paragraphs really hit me. Also kinky Patrick Santa smut!!!!
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:11pm