Good Girl - Comments

I thought she was going to stab Tess or Matt. hahaha. His nerve to continue with the affair with Tess! Can't wait to read what happens next and the tension is killing me. I can't believe this story is about to be over soon.

The first sentence made me think she'd found some kind of sex tape and I like oh hell no!

And if her mom knows that she spilt up with Matt why would she hang up picture of them, I mean is she trying to drive her daughter crazy?

The fact that he's still with Tess makes my blood boil. Clearly he doesn't regret what he did or he wouldn't be with her anymore. I hope one day when he's going along a wave a guilt so strong that he can't walk straight any more. Maybe seeing Mal in this state will make him feel some sort of remorse. I doubt it. As much as I love the revenge, the best revenge is picking your self up dust yourself off and moving on. I hope Mal is able to do that.

I would set that bitch on fire!! Ask my ex he'll tell you just psycho I am lmao anyways this filler didn't quite make up for it. But whatever lol I seriously thought she was going to kill one of them lmfao that would of been fun!! I still can't believe that Matt would still continue seeing Tess!!! MFer has some balls!!!

Good for her. I get that Mallory wouldn't have listened to her, I mean I probably wouldn't have either, but she still should have been blunt about it and come right out and said it, rather than hinting around. But I'm also glad that she didn't just let Erin right back into her life. She might say she'll never trust her again, but that can be built back up and they might not be as tight as they once were, but I'm glad she's letting her in a little bit.

I do agree with @synfulcocktail, but Mallory was right on one point ... When she found out Matt was cheating, before she knew it was with Tess, Erin should've made her aware right then and there.

Please update again soon. Xxx

Erin's right, Mal definitely wouldn't have listened at all. Erin did try to tell her, multiple times, and all the times, Mal denied it. So, I'm with Erin on this. Matt and Tess were making it so obvious, and Mal was simply naive. Goddammit, I'm so anxious to find out what'll happen next! THE NEXT CHAPTER BETTER BE LONG, WOMAN. I SWEAR TO GOD.

To be fair, Erin did try to tell her, and every time she gave her a pointed look when Tess would do something obvious, like at the golf course, Mal would say "No way! You're being ridiculous!" It wasn't really up to Erin to do it all for Mallory once she finally caught on to the fact that her fiance was a cheating asshole.

Erin should have been slapped too. But I'm glad she's sticking to her guns.

FINALLY she's told everyone how she feels! I'm proud of her. I still feel that even though she wouldn't have believed it at first, Erin should've done more than drop subtle hints to Mallory. As a best friend I would've been up in her face, screaming the words if I had to until she believed me. That's a true friend to me. I'd want my friends to let me know even if I didn't believe them at first. Can't wait to read more.

i was kinda hoping the person who had the address would've been one of the guys, but then i realized tat would've made no sense. and i hope she finds a guy that treats her right!

I could never hate you! Your writing one of my favorite stories here on Mibba!!

Chapter 14
Okay first of all I read through some comments and people are actually wanting Brian and Mal to get together?! Really? First of all he was one of the people who knew and didn't tell her, even though he seemed more remorseful than the others when Mal finally found out, he still held the truth from her. Secondly and most importantly he's with Erin.... so him getting with Mal would involve him cheating on Erin with Mal or just plain out leaving Erin for Mal... which would make Mal just as bad as Tess... o.O really where is this coming from?

Now for the chapter I'm so glad she told him off. And I'm sorry but once or twice of him doing it, I see that as getting caught up, but 5 months worth of sleeping with Tess plus not using condoms let her max out the credit cards and buying her a car?!?! The way past "getting caught up" and just full on affair and he knew full well what he was doing at that point. He knew he was hurting the person he supposedly loved. Please.
And him offering the house to Mallory is just treating her like a golding whore, like Tess, Mallory's right Tess is perfect for Matt, because clearly he likes someone who needs to be dependent on him. Glad Mallory put him in his place.

Chapter 15
One that chapter was so short and uneventful, I'm clawing at the computer screen for more, you're killing me.

Second I'm not buying Erin's excuse it's a total cop out, if she had gotten Brian to tell Mal along with her (I believe Brian was more disapproving of Matt's affair than the other guys) I think hearing it from two people plus one of Matt's guys friends, I think Mal would have bought it. Plus Mal might not have believed at first but being told eventually she would have figured things out much sooner. Erin just didn't want to deal with an awkward situation by putting herself in the middle.

More when you can please!!! And yay sequel!!!!

@ mrsmshadz
LOL Please don't hate me! Next chapter will be better/interesting, I promise. :)

Please update again like now please. I'm crying here

Boooooo I was so excited for this update and nothing interesting happened.

omg first YES! SHE PUNCHED TESS IN THE FACE THAT IS JUST AWESOME. Okay and second SHE FINALLY HIT MATT!!!!! WOOOO GO MAL!!! I can't wait to see what you've got in store for her next, and if she does decide to forgive Erin (not that I would be able to if I was her), I hope she gives her hell before she does it. But yeah, screw Matt and the rest of them, not telling her what was going on, and Tess! Gosh, I wish I could punch her out too. And I think Matt needs a good slap upside the head every time he decides to let stupid crap fall out of his mouth. Can't wait for an update!!!

I'm so happy to see her showing her claws! I still think he deserves some damage to his man parts. Lol. Update ASAP!

What a dick! She's well rid! Can't wait for more of this. Please update again soon. Xxx

Yes Mallory! There's thatt backbone ! I was starting to think it didn't exist. Fuck Matt and his arrogance. She needs to show him she's a strong independent woman and show everyone she's not just some spoiled girl. And maybe punch tess once more ! I hope Matt hurts. And tess can go get aids.

Yes Mallory! There's thatt backbone ! I was starting to think it didn't exist. Fuck Matt and his arrogance. She needs to show him she's a strong independent woman and show everyone she's not just some spoiled girl. And maybe punch tess once more ! I hope Matt hurts. And tess can go get aids.