August 23rd, 2014 at 08:43pm
I love how your characters interact with each other. Diane seriously makes me want to punch her, and I can tell Aurora feels the same way about it. Aurora is also really relateble; I've done the same thing to pretty Irish men who came to the ATV park where I worked a few summers ago (Only none of them asked me out unfortunately.) I also like how you wrote the story in present tense. usually that bugs me but in your case it made me like the story better.
I adore your description of the inside of the Halloween Ball mansion. Bats and dead me lol :) And their meeting at the ball is beautifully written too. Most of your story makes me laugh. Seriously whenever Aurora gets angry or nervous I giggle.
Thank you hunny bun!! Xxx
@ BeAZombieLikeMe
Thank you my dear! Your comment was awesome as always, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
@ Count Synula
*blushes* thank you so much for actually reading my story! You're such an awesome writer, so it means so much that you read and commented!!
@ Lulie Belle
Thank you my dear! Your comment was lovely and thanks for taking the time to read!