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She made a friend : ) Good to have a confidante

Please update soon!

great job : )

This chapter leads me to believe you've decided on Jeff.

Maybe mike will gracefully bow out because he realizes Jeff knows Eva better? That's probably too optimistic... Maybe Eva hears Jeff giving mike advice and Eva realizes Jeff still cares and knows him better? Pulling hard for Jeff here! Ha.
Have fun at ice cream! And remember, however it ends boys are stupid! Haha, great update.

Maybe mike will gracefully bow out because he realizes Jeff knows Eva better? That's probably too optimistic... Maybe Eva hears Jeff giving mike advice and Eva realizes Jeff still cares and knows him better? Pulling hard for Jeff here! Ha.
Have fun at ice cream! And remember, however it ends boys are stupid! Haha, great update.

I hate all the Jeff hate! Haha, I'm still hoping for him! I love your writing but reading all the lovey-dovey Mike and Eva scenes makes me sick? Is that normal?! Still team Jeff, I still think Mike is too sweet. Please update!!

Bet the bitchy sister wants mikey

Poor Eva!!! As if she needs anymore bad luck. Love the way she interacts with Mike. The heart wants what the heart wants and I hope it wants Mike!!

Didn't pick up on Casey being a brat until now... Kinda surprised!! Still rooting heard for Jeff!

Great job :) I think she is just afraid that Mike would cheat on her like Jeff did and doesn't want him too close. Casey does seem sneaky. My first instinct would be that she is wanting to get with Jeff but that seems almost too obvious. Maybe she is wanting to drive a wedge between Mike and Eve instead.

Casey seems a little sneaky to me. Loved the chapter and good luck at the dentist:)

Cute chapter! The hesitation about moving fast with mike gives me hope for Jeff...or that she is a really good mother. Still hope it means a future with Jeff :) love love this and good luck at the dentist!

Cute chapter! The hesitation about moving fast with mike gives me hope for Jeff...or that she is a really good mother. Still hope it means a future with Jeff :) love love this and good luck at the dentist!

Personally thought it was great. It didn't seem that awkward at all. Just regular normal insecurities people get the first time they are with someone.

Loved it!! This story seriously is perfect. The sex was a little awkward, and the fact that she compared mikes body to Jeff gives me the slightest hope that there is a future with Jeff.

I thought it was sooooo cute when Jeff called about Logan's bad dream! Omg, he is going to be a great father in real life (at least I think so, him and Megan are presh)

it's a little awkward but at the same time sex with someone the first time is always a little awkward.

Don't know what you're talking about!!! This chapter was perfect❤️

I love this story

cute