Clearly your writing is incredible to evoke such emotional comments. That's a writers dream:) You have crafted an incredible piece of work and should be very proud of it. You will not be able to please everyone with your ending, so don't! Please yourself:)
I'm still holding out for Jeff. I think that him and Evie could be incredible together! He really has grown and sacrificed. I think as Logan grows and has to balance both Mike and Jeff as father figures it would put strain on him, Evie, and Jeff and Mike's friendship. Having that much history is going to be hard to accept. What happens if Mike and Evie get married?? Will he want to be more of a father figure than Jeff? There are too many competing creation ships for all of this to work. I honestly think that Jeff is the best one for them both, but Mike and the rest of them can still be friends. I'm done ranting now!!
Great story. Mikey is still the best in my opinion but whatever you choose I am sure you will get their with style.
We don't need to be blowing up the comments feed here going at it with each other.
I am sure we can all agree cheating is crappy and no one should do it. They should get out of a relationship(s) before they do anything with another person if that is what they desire.
That Broudeur business is none of our business no matter how f*'ed up it is or was. That being said I wish nothing but luck and well wishes on marriages and whoever those bring together. Even if the two made messed up decisions to put them in the position of even getting married. That doesn't mean that I or anyone else should question the validity or sacredness of the marriage. Just makes me think different about the people in questions moral judgement and personal character. As who would ever put anyone they love or care about in a position to be lied too.
Anyway that is neither here nor there. I apologize for that and Great story still : )
@ umngrrl So like, people change. If you don't want Jeff and evie together that's your call, don't be all passive aggressive because of my comments. And I'm glad you think the Martin brodeur thing is normal, I don't, and I guarantee I'm not the only one. If you have a problem with what I say, man up and say it to my face (reply to me in this case). No need to be all passive aggressive. K thanks.
Is everyone on here serious? Jeff not only cheated on her and treated her like shit, but then expected her to drop everything and let him just play house the minute he found out about logan. Mike is far superior to Jeff, he treats Evie like his everything. Jeff and Casey would be fine together. Martin Brodeur not only cheated on his wife with his brother-in-laws wife but then married her and both families had kids before that, if they can make it, logan will be just fine.
I see that this is a Mike story, but I'm still team Jeff. I'm a sucker for old loves reconnecting and finding their way back to each other. Call me a freaking sap.
Here's to hoping that Jeff finally gets the upper hand and and him and evie get together. Just thought of this, but how would logan handle it knowing his mom ended up with his dads teammate (if evie ends up with mike) #teamjeff