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Here's to hoping that Jeff finally gets the upper hand and and him and ever get together. Just thought of this, but how would logan handle it knowing his mom ended up with his dads teammate (if ever ends up with mike) #teamjeff

At least he showed some maturity and told her to talk to Mike. Slowly he is evolving. I have hope!!

That was still a dick move Jeff did.

Uh oh, her leaving with Jeff to go somewhere just the two of them is not good! Can't wait to see what happens next!

In real life I really like Jeff Carter but in this story he is nothing but a manipulating selfish asshole. Your writing is fantastic!!!! The characterization is perfection.

This can't be good. I want her to end up with Mike, I really do. I can seeJeff turning around but that doesn't mean that they are good for each other. Still feel like he has the intention to set up mike though at guys night. Almost like he knows the guys are taking him out to liquor him up and try to get his mind off Eve

I want them to find mike at a club it something and be with another girl so jeff and Evelyn can get together!!

I dont see this turning out good to go out and see mike. I want her and mike together.

I dont see this turning out good to go out and see mike. I want her and mike together.

This doesn't sound good.........cliffhanger!!!

aww

I still want her to be with mike. Normally when I read something like this I would be the hopeless romantic wanting her and Jeff to live happily ever after but I just think too much has happened and they're in totally different places now. Mike adores her and they are so perfect for each other!!! Can't wait for more but I really hope she ends up happy with Mike :)

i think that mike is awesome and that jeff is probably going to meet someone and walk. i don't care if he wished he went back, eithermake the effort or don't, there really isn't a "well i thought about making an effort" option

This is just heartbreaking for Mike and Eva. For Jeff.......not so much!!!

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I agree she should have told Jeff about his kid hands down. Even if she were to overlook what happened in the past between her and Jeff you can't tell me that Jeff doesn't seem more into himself and into taking care of his needs than others. I like Mike, I truly feel like Mike can make her happy.

I'm not really sure who the story is for. I like Mike more though for Eva, they seem to fit better and well Jeff had four years to try to get in touch with her. Anyway I'm curious how it will all work out

One thing I'm struggling with is how everyone is obsessed about one bad choice Jeff made when he was really young, like that's the only shot he got. Well it was because Evelyn was too selfish to tell him about his son. I bet things could have been different if she had. Anyway Jeff is older and more mature now. I think it was stupid of her to get involved with Mike. Anyway I'm interested to see how it all works out.

I want her to pick Mike in the end but I will say I like how you're writing Jeff. I think people are just upse he left her in the dirt place a forgetting he just got thrown in the deep end with this whole child thing. Yes he houldnt have told mike to back off, but Jeff just wants what he know as best having a family that is together and no one can fault him for that. I hope he just meets another woman so this can all sort itself out

Still love Mike and can't stand Jeff!!!! Her sister had some wise words:) I don't know anyone at the Lincoln Park Zoo but I do know Chicago has two zoos. You might increase your chances if you apply at the Brookdale Zoo as well!! Good luck:)