The Miserable Life of Lux Day - Comments

In chapter one you have - He was my the sweetest guy which I assume the my shouldn't be there? Because it doesn't make sense.

In chapter six, it says - with a color that was a bid darker than my skin - which should be bit.

That is so wrong, what he did to her. She wanted to just drink Lemonade and good for her, taking the precaution of not wanting to get drunk on the first date. The fact that he spiked her drink (which, yes, he did with the alcohol) should have been a warning sign to her because clearly, he isn't going to be someone who is trustworthy. This Aaron guy is definitely not good news and I really think Lux should keep her distance from him.

I wish she could have seen the warning signs before allowing him a key to her place. That was incredibly silly of her to do as they only knew each other for a few months, but even though she was stupid and naive, no one deserves what he did to her. I get so angry at men who use the excuse "I have needs" to excuse sexually assaulting their partners or even someone who turned them down. No man has a right to a woman's body, and I really do wish that she'd had the courage to continue fighting. I understand why she didn't, but he needed to be told no, and forcefully.

Hopefully Lux will be able to reach out to someone soon and not fall into the victim's net of not saying something because of the shame or because they were dating and fear that it won't be seen as rape. She really needs some support in the new few chapters and I hope that she reaches out for some before Aaron gets worse than he already is (because there is no doubt that someone like him will get worse). After all, he knows where she works, where she lives, and somehow got her employees to tell him her number so clearly he's a good manipulator and she really needs to break his hold as soon as possible.

Casually reading through the october chapters and BAM! Thank you so much for dedicating a chapter to me. A really emotional one that is! I am actually in love with this story you have no idea!

I am completely attached!! Write more!!
I feel so bad for poor Lux :( I hope Aaron gets some karma!

I loved the comparison between the past rape and the present rape. So sad that it happened twice though, that's rotten luck...

This was such a sad chapter, I feel so bad for her!

Absolutely love your story!

I really like this so far.

This is really good even though the chapters are short. I like it.

Wow, this escalated quick. He is such a playboy..,

I really like this and where its going. Superb!

Thanks so much for mentioning me in your last chapter!
I really liked this update, it was very cute. I feel though this is going to be the calm before the storm...

I absolutely adore this story! I love how every chapter is based off of a writing prompt (and I love how you put each one at the bottom of the chapter, so please keep that up) and the story flows smoothly from one chapter to the next.

The title was very eye catching and I was really drawn in in the first chapter. Your writing is descriptive and I can tell you’re pouring a lot of effort into each piece.

Please keep updating because I am in love with this!