Haha, I just wanna kick Oberyn in the shin, he's toying with her, its so cute. Taking advantage of the fact that she's unsure of herself in this new place. I really loved his initial contact with her in this chapter, classic Oberyn, brazen and forward. The wine addition was excellent aswell, I think it will be good for her to take his advice and indulge a little bit, the north has obviously made her reserved.
Love that he was demanding more than suggesting aswell about the direction to the library. He does has the sort of voice where everything sounds like a command, a really nice command, he makes you feel like it's what you want to do.
Excellent chapter, and I really like how he's so honest that it's made her nervous of her future, I'm sure he'll help her out along the way, whilst making time to make jokes about her potential misery, hehe.
You are doing this so well, ugh. That grape thing - So him. You've got this down man :D
I love how you've portrayed Rhaegar aswell, in your story he actually sounds a lot like he is described in the books/opinions of characters. Very welcoming and nice, it's great to see you've captured that with only show knowledge! :D
I'm so excited for them to talk, jkdbjhbfkjbdjhbfbf!!!
I want to read this because I love Oberyn and omfg young Oberyn and seductive grapes, but at the same time I'm still reeling over his death. Such a tough decision. ):
Oh, I love this! Damn you Ned, how dare you run out on her like that -.- Slinking back to the north with your tail between your legs, for shame! I can't wait to see how Oberyn is going to fit into all of this
I can't believe I finally found an Oberyn fiction with an Original Character! He is a great character, not only on the show but at the books as well! Can't wait for updates!