For the Last Night I Lie, Could I Lie With You? - Comments

  • Clockwork Heart

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    I really really love this! It was so sweet and I just loved how you clearly stated the emotions.
    January 17th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • Carlyumz

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    wow this is awesome so far! i really hope you continue it!
    aw thank you both :D
    September 19th, 2007 at 05:11am
  • shine like millions.

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    wow this is awesome so far! i really hope you continue it!
    September 18th, 2007 at 08:43am
  • Alice Verney

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    awesome story
    September 16th, 2007 at 08:49am
  • Booshmeister

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    *gasps* Noooooooo!!!!
    I was so ready to subscribe!!
    I love the way you write... please, please change your mind!
    July 27th, 2007 at 10:09pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    that was good!
    i like your i'm trying to let you know how much you mean as days fade to. this is so different to the other one but i like good luck with i'm trying to let you know how much you mean as days fade. :D
    July 10th, 2007 at 04:27am
  • JaggedPulse

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    That was so amazing.
    write it better?
    HOW! it was mega amazing :]
    i hope you do deside to carry it on cus its awesome :]
    xxx
    June 3rd, 2007 at 08:40pm
  • Collision Kiss.

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    Yay! I got together with Gerard! =].

    I mean, erm, the character got together with Gerard =P. Thank you so much for writing this, especially when you weren't feeling the love towards the end, I know how amazingly hard it is to keep writing a story when you aren't loving writing it. I think that anything that isn't giving up entirely when that happens is pretty stunning. And this was much more than just not giving up, I thought it was beautiful. Really. Beautiful.

    Thank you =]. I hope this carries on someday, 'cos I love it heaps and I reckon it's great. Although, a new Ferard, you say? I wouldn't half mind reading that as well =P. Good luck with your other story, if it's half as good as this, then I'll be hooked =].
    June 2nd, 2007 at 01:07am
  • rollenmuziek

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    *sigh* I shall miss this....
    June 1st, 2007 at 11:15pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    I loved it, can u pm me if u write more? thanks very much! =]
    June 1st, 2007 at 10:37pm
  • Carlyumz

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    Thank you, thank you :D

    I'm not sure i think i might continue it but i'm annoying myself because i've just thought of a whole new story concept for another frerard that i want to write.

    right now i'm focusing on 'As Days fade' which is no where near ending yet thank god and then i'll see, but yes pushy i'm glad you gave me those encouraging shoves!!
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:45pm
  • JaggedPulse

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    Awesoome :]
    i LOVE it.

    xxx
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:38pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    "due to recent pushing"... who was that down to then??
    I'm sad you ended it; but I can understand your reasons. When the other one finishes can you continue this one?? Please?? I liked it :D:D
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:36pm
  • Collision Kiss.

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    As if I only just found this! =P.
    When I first started reading I wasn't sure how second person would work, tbh... but it turns out I love it! =]. I really, really do. It's a shame you don't like it so much, 'cos I think it's great =]. Thank you for perserving with it for us! =P.
    May 25th, 2007 at 01:47pm
  • Pickle Pegg

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    Write more, please!!!
    Soon!!!!
    It's really good, i love how you can place yourself in the lead characters shoes, it can be you who is sat with gerard above the crowd!!!

    XOXO
    May 24th, 2007 at 02:01am
  • Carlyumz

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    Thank you :), i've pretty much let this story die because of focusing on 'as days fade', but i'll try and post the final chapter in the next week or so :)
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:48pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    This is awesome, please keep it going... *10*
    I want her and Gee to get together..o to forget the past and just live life together... pleeeeeeeeeeeeease??
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:45pm
  • Fueled By Dana

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    I love this story! Update soon, please!
    May 5th, 2007 at 07:32pm
  • Carlyumz

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    It's whoever you want it to be, it can be yourself, frankie, a random woman/man. But i've tried not to use a specific pronoun that would indicate the main character's gender.

    Sorry for making everyone wait so long, i''ve neglected this story for my other but i'll update soon, thanks for the patience :)
    May 1st, 2007 at 11:38am
  • Sullivan1981

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    I've just come across this story.. and I'm intrigued.. I keep thinking that the person is Frank...but then I'm thinking it's a woman ? I don't know. I'm confused...

    don't stop writing...
    May 1st, 2007 at 12:00am