Run Dry - Comments

I have a feeling that some time soon here's going to be a contraception accident, or someone's going to come and mess things up. I hope it's not the latter. It's usually the latter in romance stories. That or one of them is going to get majorly drunk and cheat

OH my oh my oh my!!! I have a feeling, Ali Cat, you're gonna ruin me some time soon with these two! :)) I'm so sorry for the late comment but I surely haven't forgotten you're story! Love me these two and I want to see the progress with it. I don't know what to expect, but DEAR GOD am I waiting on pins and needles.

Give me some of that Patrick funky stuff ;)

@ star collision.
Okay, good, I thought it came kind of rushed, but then again I feel like this entire relationship is rushed, you know? They're sort of just on a downward slope (not in a bad way) and things are just progressing so quickly. I want them to stay together too, but there's so much that could happen! No, YOUUUU stay awesomeeee

I want these two to stay together forever. I kind of think that their confessions were at the right time, you know. They kind of thrust themselves into this intimate situation quick, started a relationship so it only makes sense for their feelings to progress at the same speed. I guess that's just the way they roll. I need to read more though. You're awesome, stay awesome.

@ birds ate my face
I haven't decided which way I'd like this to go...I have some ideas in mind, but I guess you'll have to stay tuned to see!

@ chynnablueink
You're the boss at always commenting on my stories, fOR REAL. God id probably give up everything just to have Patrick jfc

@ sodapop curtis
GIRL THATS MY FAVORITE LINE IN THIS WHOLE GODDAMN FIC I DONT MEAN TO TOOT MY OWN HORN BUT I LOVE IT SO MUCH. BUT NOT AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU

@ milesandmaisy
I'm pretty sure anyone who WOULDNT have drunk sex with Patrick is fucking crazy. God I really like to hope he's like this in real life but we'll never know.

oh, Patrick...*fans self* I will have drunken sex with you any night of the week *swoon*

"I hope to God this isn't all a dream. You're the most beautiful thing my drunken eyes have ever seen."

OK THAT IS PURE POETRY DAMN

also I love that alcohol is the main symbol in this story, it adds depth in a way that I've never seen in a fic before (then again I don't read as many Patricks fics as I do Pete)

You're the boss at writing THOSE scenes, my dear. ;)

God I hope nothing will ruin their relationship

Um. The way you write Patrick is so. freaking. hot.

And he's blonde

I mean

JFC

Please update!!

@ sodapop curtis
Omg I'm glad you liked it! I liked writing it! I love when Patrick talks that way
I'm glad they're out of their funk now, we'll see where things go! And thanks, it was really awful but everything turned out okay!

DUDE THAT SCENE WAS SO FREAKING HOT WHAT THE HELL. I almost feel dirty for imagining Patrick talking like that, oh lord

Also I love Harley freaking out about Penny omg. I'm so glad they got out of their weird little funk and have agreed on their relationship!! I'm sorry you had such a shitty day at work bb, I know how that goes

@ star collision.
Aw aw I love Patrick too! I'm always scared I'm going to write him the same in different stories, but I'm glad you like him in this! Thanks for asking about work--everything is okay now! Ilysmmm

@ mswrite85
Ugh sweet but dirty talking Patrick is what I LIVE FOR. Seriously though. Love himmmmmm. I'll write more once I'm recovered from my weekend of FOB ;)

@ lady_enygma
I love Penny omg! I HAD to include her, haha. I loved the slumber party feel too, and honestly I wasn't planning for anything to happen then all of a sudden sexy Patrick appeared! I'm glad that there's a realism to this, that's kind of what I try for, even if it ends up being some drabble shit. I kind of like to make situations where this stuff could happen, you know? That's a big complement though, thank you so much!

@ milesandmaisy
Dirty Patrick will be the death of me I can't even

@ bobobo
Dirty mouthed Patrick got me like dsk;gjvnskjgneirjgnegb;

@ sodapop curtis
PATRICK'S SO CUTE I CAN'T DEAL OMG. I love that this reminds you of Twelve Days because it reminds me of it too! I was like "Oh shit great the first chapter is basically the same ok now what." I'm glad they got to that point quicker too, it's just so painstaking to have to be like "Okayyyy now whatttttt" Eek and I love that you love the parallels to the song. Ilysmmmm

Aw man, these two will be the death of me. They're so cute together. Also, I love love love how you're writing Patrick.I love how quickly they've just thrown themselves towards each other. It feel so real. Awesome stuff. Also, I hope you're okay, with work and everything. Keep on being rad and writing beautifully!

D'awwww! Penny STUMP. :)) Defiinitely digging the sweet but dirty talking Patrick can become. Glad to see an update to this!! Yay!

WRITE MORE.

Yay, Penny made an appearance!

I love how innocent their night started what with the whole slumber party feel, and then it all went deliciously downhill when they got to the bedroom. I loved Patrick's little glint of dominance when they finally got to it, and I love how he asked if it was okay. There reallys is a realism about this that you dont come across too often. loved it

oh, yes, I do love dirty Patrick *sigh*

Oh god Patrick is amazing. Dirty mouthed Patrick is amazinger haha

WOW okay I haven't had the time to catch up with everyone's stories on here but I finally got to read this yay!! Harley and Patrick remind me of Pete and Marsha in a way where they're just so caught up in this whirlwind romance that they don't spare any time to take a breath and just let it all sink in, and I think that's what the end of that last chapter was. I'm glad they got to that point quicker than Pete and Marsha did, though. (I rly need to stop referencing Twelve Days omg)

Also I looooove the parallels to the song. Titles that actually incorporate into the story are my favorite.

"Brand new to each other, brand new to the rest of the world. We've got so much time, Harley Quinn. Don't worry your pretty little head."

PATRICK IS SO CUTE IN THIS I'M BLUSHIN'

Wow Harley way to make Patrick feel like crap haha