Run Dry - Comments

How did you make that both sexy AND romantic?! I felt the feels. "steady movement of hips and lips" sounds like a FOB lyric, I love it. Can't wait for more!

@ chynnablueink
Aw thank you! They're going to hit a little hiccup, I think. But hopefully things will smooth over :) I love Patrick as angel, and I also love him when he's the furthest thing from innocent ;)

@ mswrite85
:D Hopefully I can post it tonight or tomorrow!! It's about half done!! That's exactly how I feel about your story too!

@ lady_enygma
Haha, I had to. I didn't think I could let them sleep together with the amount of alcohol they'd had. I decided Patrick had to be the lightweight in the relationship because obviously Harley is the baddass ;D

@ star collision.
I would definitely do the same, because Patrick IS a beautiful human. I love drunk Patrick. I just can't even deal. I love that he recorded Pax Am Days drunk, I love that he has a song about drinking. I just love drunk Patrick and Soul Punk Patrick so much I needed to put them together! And yes, everyone knows that angel has some of the devil in him

By the way, I love your theme ;) I'm totally jealous.

Love love love this chapter. Harley telling Patrick he's beautiful is probably what I'd do in that situation.... Also seeing more of drunk Patrick was awesome (if only for a while) and I think someone else mentioned that it's nice to see Patrick portrayed as the little devil he can be.

I love that Patrick threw up and passed out before they could get down to anything. I'm going to love seeing how far this goes

D'aww! I'm diggin' where this might lead to. :D

Waiting on pins and needles for the next installment. :)

Love seeing drunk/hungover Patrick! People forget he's not a total angel all the time Looking forward to seeing how their relationship progresses!

@ sodapop curtis
Aw aw bb you're perfect I'm trying to write, like, this different, more brazen version of Patrick but I don't know how I'm doing! I haven't decided how in-depth I want to go into their relationship either, you know? I intended for this to be a very short story, like five chapters short, but I really like their characters and don't want to cut it off!

@ bobobo
No omg I bet yours is ten thousand times better you need to post it pleaseeeeeee

@ lady_enygma
Lol I think so too, but we'll see

@ mswrite85
That picture of Patrick thoughhhh *fans self* I HAD to use it, I couldn't just not. Us great minds think alike!!!

I LOVE THIS and I love how spunky they are, crazy drunken kids in love. I also love how you don't waste any time getting to the romance, and then all their witty banter...gah, just perfect, you're perfect, bb

fuck fuck fuck I started a story on my google docs that started like this too. You're doing a much better job than I did though haha

lol, they're going to pass out before they have the chance to get down to anything

@ Ali Cat
I definitely dig the fact that you're on top of the Batman game! I'm a bit of a Batman nerd (YEP), so I understand the logic behind the timeline of Harley Quinn.

PS - The thumbnail picture of Patrick you have for this specific fic is the same as my lock screen. Great minds DO think alike!

Okay wow I need to read more. I love how you weaved the Run Dry song into the chapter. Drunk Patrick is great and ugh I could actually imagine him doing his dumb white boy dance moves.

@ ToxicMayson
Thank youuuu! I'm always afraid I should write more, but sometimes it just feels right to stop in a certain spot, you know?
@ mswrite85
I was going to have that be the case! But Harley Quinn wasn't actually introduced until 1992, and I certainly wanted Harley to be older than that, so I had to nix that idea, but I really wanted her middle name to stay Quinn so I had to suffer, haha. When I first decided on the name Harley I knew immediately I wanted her middle name to be Quinn. So I did name her that because of Batman, but within the story she was not named that because of Batman. I'm glad us great minds think alike!

I had a similar Patrick "moment" while I started reading the fic. I saw the name "Harley Quinn" and my immediate question was, "Like from the Batman comic series?" And well... I got my answer :))

I'm excited to see the next installment!

First chapter was amazing!! :D and I didn't think it was to short

This seems like it will be awesome!

CAN YOU SENSE MY EXCITEMENT

YES I WANT IT GIVE IT TO ME