June 25th, 2014 at 08:46pm
Aww :) I liked it!
I hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism though. A thing you could work on is giving the characters a little more depth but I certainly understand that's difficult for such a short story.
But it was well-written and I liked all these 'shark attack' and 'I hope a sinkhole swallows me' remarks, they are funny :) And Zack is very cute aw! Good job!
I don't mind at all I'll try and work on that next time. Thanks for reading and commenting!