Broken Guns - Comments

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
Thank you! I'm glad you hear you enjoyed it so much! I might try and publish this story one day, although it might be self-published or done through a very small independent publisher.

This is such an incredible story! You must be published. Your characters are developed so thoroughly and authentically and the build-up to the romance was so fantastic. I haven't been on this site in years, and it was very refreshing to come back and find this. Thank you thank you thank you. This story is amazing.

@ Not2day
Thank you very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I might try and publish it one day, but it might be a self-publish. :)

Omg!! I must say this is one of the better stories I have read on this site the characters and the story development between the main characters and plot.... It amazes me you have not tried to publish the story.... I luv it...

@ polka dot perfection
It's actually got one more chapter left to go! I just haven't worked on it for a while but in the next month or so I'll probably get it finished and posted. I'm really glad you're enjoying it - there's a sequel too. :)

Is this completed? I'd be fine with where it ended though, seeing that way they'd get the CC involved, get away and live happily ever after. I love them too much for anything else. lol. By the way, when Ezra was like "just do it, do what you've been wanting to do" I died inside with happiness:D

Is this completed? I'd be fine with where it ended though, seeing that way they'd get the CC involved, get away and live happily ever after. I love them too much for anything else. lol. By the way, when Ezra was like "just do it, do what you've been wanting to do" I died inside with happiness:D

@ Ktulu
Oh thank you very much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it and the characters. :)

Your literature is so beautifully written and I can't thank you enough for posting it. It's refreshing to read something of this quality with characters so true to themselves: each having their own particular set of values and quirks. Your plot is addicting as well and I can't wait for you to post the next chapter.

@ Zadiekins
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

I'm really enjoying this. It's so interesting. And I love Ezra and Emery together!

Oh, wow. Wasn't expecting that. Glad it happened, though. They're good together.

Well, I look forward to reading them when they arrive.

@ h.a.p.p.y.
Thanks so much, I'm really flattered! I'm really glad you enjoy everything. I have a couple other stories to put up here, but they're in various stages of rewrites so it might be a while before they show. :)

I can't wait to read it.
I already started on it. I'm on the second chapter, but work is getting in the way of reading it. xP You are now officially my favorite author. You write so well it's remarkable! And your stories are so different and realistic. It's insane how into the stories I get after just one chapter. I love it!

@ h.a.p.p.y.
The next chapter being written has more German than usual in it, so I'm going to include translations for at least that one!
I'm glad you plan to check the other story out - it is a LOT different from this one, and part of a four book series. It's in rewrites at the moment so only the first book is posted here as of yet.

It's fine if you don't as long as it isn't of importance. You write so well I'm going to check out your other story as soon as I get the free time.

@ h.a.p.p.y.
I'm very glad you're enjoying the story so far! As for the bits in other languages, it's not really required to understand them to follow the story, I made sure nothing important was getting said in other languages! Though I could provide translations at the ends of chapters, that would probably be helpful. :)

I've only just begun to read chapter four, but this story is so addicting. Each word read leaves me wanting to continue the chapter before moving on to the next. It is so well written, so believable. I adore it greatly. My only complaint being that anything not in English is left with me only guessing. I speak neither of the languages, and context clues really don't help in this case. However, I will admit, it is only a small complaint. Nothing that stops the story from being so wonderful.