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  • crossed out name.

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    Oh man, you're so sweet! I'm happy you love Time Bomb and that whole series :3 you'll be happy to know that I just started the newest chapter and it's halfway done! I wrote, like, 8k last night wih sudden inspiration to get goin' (which was needed, since Ive been so busy with work/travel/being lazy that I haven't worked on it in ages and have been writing other stories instead)! So I'm hoping to update this weekend!

    ANYWAY ONTO MORE IMPORTANT THINGS.
    Kenny.
    This is your chance to push Ben in the lake. Just makeout with Kacey all you want and drown Ben with your other hand. He doesn't need both hands to mack on his girl. Hes a multitasker. He can use his mouth and still have a hand for drowning. I seriously didn't expect his little tantrum, but I'm also not surprised. He's such a baby (as Abby and Kacey would know). So can she just dump Ben already? She was only after him cause she thought Ken wasn't interested. And he is. So lets get Ben to go away already, K? K.
    October 3rd, 2014 at 05:55am
  • mmmxalright

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    I can't wait to see if the drama unfolds. And props to Kacey for making the first move, I approve of that. Update soon!
    September 30th, 2014 at 02:50pm
  • princewentz

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    It is lame of me to say that I have tears in my eyes? Happy tears, of course. I had a feeling that the guys would show up at the cabin. I did not expect Kacey & Kennedy to *finally* kiss nor did I expect Ben to ask Kacey out. I do find it absolutely adorable how Kenny was pouting. And bless John for being such a caring friend. Very excited to see what's next! :)
    September 30th, 2014 at 07:09am
  • kaydayparade912

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    I literally screamed after reading this chapter omfg I'm so happy that Ken and Kacey kissed! I'm in love with this story please update again soon!
    September 30th, 2014 at 04:49am
  • WhiskeyPrincess118

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    Ok, not gonna lie. for 90% of this chapter I was preparing a very angry comment, but then all of a sudden Ken admits his feelings and then they're kissing and GAHGIDSFKJ AJFIDK K.

    Legit happy dancing right now, you have no idea.

    I do have one concern. If Kacey could see Ken sitting off by himself, can't the rest of them see the two now making out? Hmmm. Pondering. Maybe I just read it wrong? Anyway.

    I WANT MORE OF THIS, NOW. WITH MORE KISSING PLEASE AND THANK YOU.xx
    wonderful chapter btw :)
    September 30th, 2014 at 03:44am
  • WhiskeyPrincess118

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    So I read this in the bus and my memory of it is sort of foggy, but I'll do my best of actually getting a comment down.

    I think it'd be something along the lines of "I hate ben. I really don't like him. GO AWAY BEN." and also "CAN THEY(Ken & Kacey) JUST KISS AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER IN A BARBIE DREAM HOUSE"

    So yeah, basically a broken record. Also, I still have a weird feeling about Ben...Something's just been off with him to me since the first time he was introduced....
    September 28th, 2014 at 10:43pm
  • crossed out name.

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    I want Ben to fall in the lake and drown.
    Is that too harsh?
    Maybe Ken just surprises everyone and shows up at the lake shirtless and everything she's worked so hard to ignore goes out the window. Or Ben goes out the window.

    Please please update ASAP! I know you're busy with a life and work and all that other stuff but I really need Ben's demise soon because poor Ken can't take much more competition before he is just a big baby and cries. If anyone cries it should be Ben. Post-window throwing and/or drowning.

    This chapter was lovely, just like all the others. Those two are so stubborn and they're making me so impatient. Maybe John and Abby should go high-school on their asses and lock them in a closet? Or lock Ben in a closet alone and throw away the key. Maybe they can just sic John on Ben and he'll annoy Ben to death. Are you catching the theme here? I'm very anti- team Ben, okay? Make him go away so Ken can stop being an emo baby and ask her out already!!!
    September 24th, 2014 at 08:15am
  • princewentz

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    I shall never give up hope! I would really like to see the perspective of Kennedy with the guys and how, I'm sure, they would tease him. I like this side of John. You can tell that he's trying to do some good without stepping on anyone's toes too much. I'm not sure if I have said this previously, but I do like Ben. But I don't love him like I do Kenny.
    September 24th, 2014 at 06:54am
  • lovelyhope

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    Kacey is going to be miserable on this weekend trip with Ben because she's going to spend the whole time wishing she was with Kennedy instead. You can't hide your true feelings, princess haha
    September 24th, 2014 at 05:14am
  • WhiskeyPrincess118

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    Seriously, you couldn't cut Ken some slack on his birthday?! IT WAS SO CLOSE YET SO FAR. Argh, all I want to do is grab them like Ken and Barbie dolls and smooch them together while making kissing sounds.

    I still don't like Ben, FYI. But, seeing as Kacey does -for whatever reason that may be- I still think she needs to give Kenny a fair chance. She should play the field a little, maybe date both of them? Then, what's already SO OBVIOUS to everyone else, would become clear to her too. Which is that her and Ken both like each other and should be together.

    I mean, come on, who ever heard of a Ben doll? That's just silly. The world needs Barbie (kacey) to be with Ken. End of story. Happily ever after. Boom I solved it all.

    P.s. ken has impeccable timing, ahah he liked my photo on Instagram right as I was reading this... Lets just say I felt suddenly really uncomfortable and embarrassed ahah also creepy as fuck lol :p
    September 16th, 2014 at 05:41am
  • lovelyhope

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    Ugh. Why, Ben, why? Ben always has to come in an ruin everything. Abby does have a point though...Kacey needs to decide which boy she wants to be with (*cough*Kennedy*cough*), or else people are going to get hurt.
    September 14th, 2014 at 08:38pm
  • princewentz

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    Kacey, babe, listen to your gut please. Ben's a great guy, I admit that, but Kenny adores you. You adore him. Prove to him that love at first sight exists. I'm begging you.
    September 14th, 2014 at 07:01am
  • WhiskeyPrincess118

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    I'm getting redundant with these comments, but UGH MAKE A MOVE. SOMEONE. KISS ALREADY. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME. It's so obvious that they're both into each other..... Ugh, the frustration.
    September 11th, 2014 at 02:11am
  • princewentz

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    They have fallen so hard for each other! Now they need to fess up and kiss because they're absolutely adorable and I love them
    September 11th, 2014 at 12:16am
  • lovelyhope

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    Ok, I'm going to need these two to stop hanging out if they're not going to admit their feelings for each other. I cannot handle this whole oh, we like each other but we're going to act like we don't bs. Ugh.
    September 10th, 2014 at 04:38am
  • mmmxalright

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    Omg. I wanted them to kiss so badly! I was rooting for ya Kennedy! I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the way you wrote about her blushing, just the words you used were fantastic. Update soon!
    September 3rd, 2014 at 02:06pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I love Kennedy, but the boy is kind of stupid. Isn't it obvious that Kacey isn't like the other girls he's dated in the past? She won't nag him and make him spend all of his time with her (although he's practically spending all of his time with her anyway so why should it matter?). Just give the relationship a chance, Kenny! You won't be sorry.
    September 2nd, 2014 at 06:18am
  • princewentz

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    'Atta boy Kenny! Now, in the words of Sebestein, kiss the girl!
    September 2nd, 2014 at 02:47am
  • WhiskeyPrincess118

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    I WANTED THEM TO KISS DANG IT. NO FAIR NO FAIR NO FAIR. UUUUUUUUUUUGH. I need to teach this boy a thing or two, don't I? Also, you cut this waaaay too short! I wanna see their date. Yeah, that's right, I'm calling it a date. So there.

    p.s. i like to think of these two as Ken & Barbie. You know, cause Ken is Ken and well, Kacey is such a girly girl. Ahaha, that's all! Have a good week! :)
    September 2nd, 2014 at 12:36am
  • mmmxalright

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    EH I'm still not feeling Ben. Kennedy needs to tell her how he feels, he really does. Man up Kennedy!
    August 27th, 2014 at 02:30pm