This just gets better with every chapter! The tension is building
Okay, so I'm not taking back what I said about Brian being an ass, but I did love all the things he said when he was saving Krissi. They were sweet--and probably brought on by that nice dose of reality that Jimmy hit him with. I can understand Krissi's confusion and oh dear, I can't even imagine how Anna is going to react when she finds out who her father is. Keep it up, ladies! Seriously. This is one of the best Avenged fan-fics I've ever read.
Krissi is God's daughter (at least from what I could tell) and Anna is Lucifer's daughter. Holy shit, things are getting intense! But at least Brian saved Krissi, that was really sweet of him.
I can't wait to see where all this leads! Great update :)
awww i feel soo bad for anna to find out like that. Brian is a huge asshole he needs to cut his shit. I feel like maybe he is jealous of her or something because he is the only one being a douchebag
I know it's against the rules, but who can blame her for what she did? How could you not want to go back and get a glimpse of the family you left behind way too soon? I'm with Matt in my hope that the Council doesn't go too hard on her. *fingers crossed* God, Brian's a dick! Just...wow. And things are only going to get worse when Anna finds out where her mom really is. Update STAT!
I don't really read stories that involve band members because it's not really my thing, but my god... I love this! It's dark and keeps you wanting more, and I guess even if you didn't know who Jimmy and that were, this would pass as an original easily... the story blends really well between the two authors, and descripition from both is incredibly vivid as well... I'm actually going to keep up with this and see where you take it :) awesome
Well chapter eight is definitely interesting to say the least. Hmm wonder what this Az guy is gonna do hehe... Matt standing up for Anna... awww cute I really liked the chapter, there was one spelling mistake I noticed you spelled 'grate' instead of 'great'... that's all, a minor mistake. great chapter though :)
Oh, no! They have her mom? I can only imagine they'll use her for blackmail. And who can blame Krissi for being freaked out by those visions???? These things come to pass almost always, right? It has to have her worried about what's coming for all of them. You guys have me on the edge of my seat!