I really enjoyed this chapter! Poor Brian got cockblocked and Matt was so cute! Ugh, I agree, this chapter was full of major Matt feels! And the dialogue between him and Anna is so realistic, I love it.
The flashback adds so much to this story and explains the attitudes of both Krissi and Brian. I like getting that background. I think this Christian character is going to end up playing a huge part in this sense of foreboding that Krissi has. And poor Anna. She's trying to make the best out of this situation and new things keep cropping up to complicate her, um, "life." But hey, she saw Matt naked. Hahaha! That's a positive!
Oh jeez! I just LOVED these last two chapters. I totally pictured Matt like on the seize the day video shower scene too, but I don't know how Anna managed to keep her cool, I know I wouldn't. Brian can actually be a sweet guy, too bad he's only like that to Krissi. Update soon!
@ MissSpitfire Lol are you talking about when I spelled "House shoes" as "House hoes?" I'M STILL LAUGHING ABOUT THAT TYPO. I keep forgetting to fix it. I'll go do that now. Thanks for reading!
@ MissSpitfire Lol are you talking about when I spelled "House shoes" as "House hoes?" I'M STILL LAUGHING ABOUT THAT TYPO. I keep forgetting to fix it. I'll go do that now. Thanks for reading!
Okay So I am on the fifth chapter, this is my first Avenge Sevenfold story but I have to say that this is a great AU. The writing in this is wonderful, it's flows wonderfully, great vocabulary and the descriptions are great. I loved the scene with Aphrodite and how Anna and Krissi joked around, their friendship is really great. I think Anna's gift is unique and very intriguing and the relationships in this are really great Krissi and Brian are just... urgh... love them :) There are a few spelling mistakes in the first chapter but there nothing too major. Other then that I can't fault on anything else. Onward to the next chapters :)
Wow, I've just found out this story and I'm amazed. You two write very well and although it is a complex story, everything is very well explained and it's quite easy to follow. Even though Brian is a douche I love his character! Can't wait for the next update! *Sorry for the double post!*
Wow, I've just found out this story and I'm amazed. You two write very well and although it is a complex story, everything is very well explained and it's quite easy to follow. Even though Brian is a douche I love his character! Can't wait for the next update!
Damn! Lucifer being a douche and what not >.< I'm glad Krissi and Anna have a connection to help one another. And I can't wait to see who is in the shadows! Update soon :3
Damn! Lucifer being a douche and what not >.< I'm glad Krissi and Anna have a connection to help one another. And I can't wait to see who is in the shadows! Update soon :3
Great update! :)