September 11th, 2014 at 01:49pm
I don't know, it's a neat perspective how you have the two parallel. I like it.
Update soon please. And Louis needs to like... Smarten up lol
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I really look forward to the present day chapters to see what is going on in he life throughout her pregnancy.
I don't know, it's a neat perspective how you have the two parallel. I like it.
Update soon please. And Louis needs to like... Smarten up lol August 20th, 2014 at 05:03am -
Awe. I feel so bad for her. ):
Great chapter as always, looking forward to reading more!!
Update soon? :)August 14th, 2014 at 08:43pm -
Such a good story. Can't wait to see what happens.August 9th, 2014 at 06:39pm
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Looking forward to the next chapter!!! :-DAugust 3rd, 2014 at 03:30pm
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I love how they are when they're together :D too cute!
Great chapter, as always!
Update soon, can't wait for more! :)July 27th, 2014 at 06:42pm -
This is really a good story, love it!!!
I love how they are around each other, it's very cute! You write them very well.
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)July 27th, 2014 at 03:29am -
Great two chapters, the relationship between Lola and Louis is so relatable. You have captured it so well and I just love the interaction between the two. I can't wait to see where you take this next. I just LOVE all the flashback memories they are gorgeous... and in reality the two need to get back together asap hehe just sayin'
Update soon :)July 25th, 2014 at 10:19am -
Great chapter as always! :)
Can't wait for them to spend more time together!!
Update again soon, please! :DJuly 22nd, 2014 at 11:55pm -
I get that feeling all the time. No one reads my stuff either. But I am reading this and I L O V E it!! lol Update?July 16th, 2014 at 12:16am
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great story so far, really creative. love it, keep it up, more updates please! :)July 16th, 2014 at 12:10am
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great story so far, really creative. love it, keep it up, more updates please! :)July 15th, 2014 at 11:41pm
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Ahhh, loving the updates!!! :D
Update soon please!! <3July 15th, 2014 at 11:24pm -
Once again another great chapter, the interaction between Louis and Lola is adorable, their little duet in the car
adorbs. Their date was something else wasn't it? Loved it :) the last sentence made me giggle, Lola you teaser you....
Can't wait to see what you do next with this, please update soon :)July 14th, 2014 at 08:33am -
Once again another great chapter! This is a really cute chapter, Louis being the gentleman that everyone knows he is I can't wait to see where they go for their date, very excited to see what happens between the two while on the date hehe :) great update, update soon :) July 10th, 2014 at 01:38pm
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Loving these updates!! Update soon please!July 9th, 2014 at 07:58pm
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This is such a cute story, I really love the parallels between the fairytale sections and the reality. However that break up scene had me cursing Louis something severe...
No, just no! but the other scenes are adorable. And i honestly cannot wait to see where you take this.
Emily is hilarious as well July 9th, 2014 at 12:34pm -
Great chapter as usual. :D
Loved it, update soon please!! (:July 5th, 2014 at 03:48pm -
I love the layout! :D It's great! And the story itself is amazing! :D update soon? Recommended and subscribed!July 4th, 2014 at 04:06pm
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Awww, I love this so much!!!
Please update sooon, girl <3July 3rd, 2014 at 10:08pm
Emily is definitely the best side kick/friend ever she always makes me giggle. Loving her character so much.
Louis and Lola cooking
Please update soon I love this.