I freaking loveeeeeeeeee this!!!!!!! Hooo-my-god. This chapter seriously seriously had me laughing because I pictured every single thing and because I've kinda had a night like this myself. It wasn't pretty the next morning.
"Princess Lola had just turned twenty-one years old when she met her prince. Prince Louis spotted his princess in the crowd at a ball in town. Lola was wearing a big gown and her hair down, to Louis she looked like the most beautiful being he’d ever laid eyes on"
“You’re twenty-fucking-one! It’s time to finally drink!”
I legit lost it right then and there, it was hilarious. But I just love this, I love this even more than I loved it yesterday and that was quite a lot of love there, hon.
This story is very interesting and I love how you switch from the 'fairy tale' Lola wrote for her unborn child to what actually happened. And I love how you make Lola wrote it in such way that it makes me feel like reading an actual fairy tale.
This already seems incredibly promising and adorable. The layout is just so cute. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. I can't wait for the real stuff to begin.
"Princess Lola had just turned twenty-one years old when she met her prince. Prince Louis spotted his princess in the crowd at a ball in town. Lola was wearing a big gown and her hair down, to Louis she looked like the most beautiful being he’d ever laid eyes on"
“You’re twenty-fucking-one! It’s time to finally drink!”
I legit lost it right then and there, it was hilarious. But I just love this, I love this even more than I loved it yesterday and that was quite a lot of love there, hon.
Don't make me beg for another update, pls.