Call of Duty - Comments

Ugh you always have the best photos of Matt. I just wanna put that body ontop of a sundae tattoos and all!!! Anyway I'm thinking that maybe she was held hostage by the enemy cause you said tribal tattoo, very subtle hint I think. But update soon so I can know for sure!!!

@ acid_rain88
*laughs evilly* All apart of my master plan amuwahaha! Thanks so much for reading, hun!

@ acid_rain88
*laughs evilly* All apart of my master plan amuwahaha! Thanks so much for reading, hun!

ooh damn.. ya know at first i thought that matt was hired to kidnap and then maybe kill her or hand her over to some ppl that would kill or sell her- something like that..

but with that flashback i instead have this feeling that she had been kidnapped by some other ppl and that he was hired to rescue her or something like that.. anyway this is really interesting

This makes me much more interested.
It's like one second he is helping her and then the next he is all authoritative.
talk about some crazy whip lash!

Double!

I love this so far! Matt as a soldier just seems super sexy ;D anywho, I'm super curious as to how he got ahold of poor Emma! He's so rough with her, it's not like she'd be able to overpower him even if she tried so there's really no reason for him to be!

Update soon, yeah? :)

@ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR
Thank you, sweetie! Don't worry about double posts lol. It's happening everywhere across Mibba it seems. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I wasn't sure about but yes! Something interesting does happen.

@ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR
Thank you, sweetie! Don't worry about double posts lol. It's happening everywhere across Mibba it seems. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I wasn't sure about but yes! Something interesting does happen.

sorry for the double post. Connection sucks!

Great update sweets. You are doing amazing and just take time. Do not rush things just because you feel obligated to make other people happy. Everyone is loving your story and we support you always. I love your writing and I wait patiently for the what's yet to come.

I love how Matt is described in this story. He takes his job very seriously. It's sad that she doesn't even remember how she got there or where she is. I would have been a lot more scared than her if I was in her position. I can't wait to see where it goes and hope that something maybe dangerous or trouble happens before help comes. At least she knows his name, right?

Hugs!

Well, promised to take a look at this, and now that I have, I like it. I can't wait to see where it goes. As usual, since I do love your stories, this one I have a feeling is going to be amazing.

Just do me one favor, DO NOT freak out about writing it, and remember that you're a better writer than you think you are. Take your time and don't force it. I've seen you do amazing things!

xoxo J

Hmmm, this is an interesting look at Black Ops and I'm glad someone has finally used the ACTUAL black ops rather than the Call of Duty game series black ops. Now I'm not a huge fan of Avenged Sevenfold so I can't say much on the characters but this seems interesting enough that I might be able to read more when you post more.

As for criticism, I really didn't feel the need to anywhere. Your layout choice for this is simply but it really goes along well with the story. I am interested in seeing where this goes so I will check back occasionally to read a little :)

Hmmm, this is an interesting look at Black Ops and I'm glad someone has finally used the ACTUAL black ops rather than the Call of Duty game series black ops. Now I'm not a huge fan of Avenged Sevenfold so I can't say much on the characters but this seems interesting enough that I might be able to read more when you post more.

As for criticism, I really didn't feel the need to anywhere. Your layout choice for this is simply but it really goes along well with the story. I am interested in seeing where this goes so I will check back occasionally to read a little :)

I promised I would at least read one of your stories late tonight and so I did lol

I absolutely love the description to this story.
It was very well detailed, making me get even more into the story.
I could picture each scene happening as if I was on the sidelines watching the characters spring in action in their main motive for this first part of the story.
Matt sure has a nasty temper and I had a feeling he would be a hot-headed dick right at first appearance.
He slightly terrifies me to be honest lol
I feel bad for the girl.
I would be just as terrified as she was
_{yet strangely aroused because its hot-ass Matt LOL}

Great story!
I can't wait for more! :)

Hey Syn.
I especially like the title of your story, it reminds me of a pc game. And basically, this piece did not betray my expectations.
After I read the summary, I was expecting action (and I’m still expecting it) but instead I got a thriller suspense, which is equally good. I’m so sure I’ll get to see action next. This began so fabulously, I can only imagine what’s coming up next.
I won’t enlist the questions rampaging my mind right now, because there are too many of them. So, I’m simply subscribing to know what’s next. I’m very excited, I just hope this turns out to be one of the most epic stories on mibba. I wonder if Emma’s a soldier, judging from the “khaki pants”. But if she’s one…she didn’t act very courageously, eh? Let’s see if her actions are justified. Can only tell later…
Truth be told, I’ve always wanted to write something like this. And inspired by you, I might as well give it a try now. (:
P.S.: Your layout is absolutely gorgeous!

Hey Syn.
I especially like the title of your story, it reminds me of a pc game. And basically, this piece did not betray my expectations.
After I read the summary, I was expecting action (and I’m still expecting it) but instead I got a thriller suspense, which is equally good. I’m so sure I’ll get to see action next. This began so fabulously, I can only imagine what’s coming up next.
I won’t enlist the questions rampaging my mind right now, because there are too many of them. So, I’m simply subscribing to know what’s next. I’m very excited, I just hope this turns out to be one of the most epic stories on mibba. I wonder if Emma’s a soldier, judging from the “khaki pants”. But if she’s one…she didn’t act very courageously, eh? Let’s see if her actions are justified. Can only tell later…
Truth be told, I’ve always wanted to write something like this. And inspired by you, I might as well give it a try now. (:
P.S.: Your layout is absolutely gorgeous!

@ foREVer_Liacide_XIII
Thank you! More is coming on this after I update Synyster Shadows!

I really hope there is more to this because it's like a whole new take and it's all so exciting!
So many questions to be left off like this, I need more!

@ Albluerose
Thanks hun!