Everything about this story screams action which is something I love to read about. The first chapter came out very strong and I believed it was a great start. It shows that it will be very entertaining and full of surprises. I've always known you were a great writer. Like always you managed to put together the perfect words of detailed descriptions which makes the story that much vivid and great to imagine or visualize as we read. The layout is amazing. I loved the whole ideal of the gun and I can't even begin to explain how captivating the title is. Only the title itself makes any potential read draw into knowing what is going to happen. Great start and can't wait to see where this goes.
Thank you, love. Your comment totally made me smile. Glad it seemed actiony enough lol. I always worry.