The Conductor - Comments

Oh my that took an unexpected turn D:
I'm gonna bawl my eyes out too, I just didn't expect that
Tyler needs to come and help him, yeah he should come and help him
Oh my... I'm just gonna wait here for your new chapter then

Okay, gonna go bawl my eyes out now. I want Michael to prove that The Conductor (and its creator) made him go berserk and kill those people. Then everything between Tyler and he needs to go back to normal so they can be all cute together. 'Kay, gonna pass out from frustration now.

But... what?... No!
I just... no, this cannot be allowed.

Yay, finally :D
I've been checking everyday for a new chap ^^
And this one is just... whoa :o
Want to know what happens next and if Tyler is coming back :o

Wow.

God I haven't been online in forever D:
Great story though, really love it :D
I can perfectly imagine these two sweeties <3

I'm really curious to find out more about Elizabeth's death. And Tyler is adorable.

There are still red alerts popping up in my head. Don't think I didn't catch the foreshadowing! The woman and her tears. Making Michael feel better... This seriously isn't making any sense, but whatever. You still will surprise me, no doubt. Because no matter how much I want not to believe it, it's going to happen...

oh my goodness this is amazing
i love this story
it fuels me and my love of bohner

WHAT WAIT HUH HOLD UP ASDFGHJKL:

I agree with Felix. Innocence, where have you gone. This chapter just smacked me up in the face, from the beginning to the absolute brutal descriptions of Elizabeth and her awful state. That nearly made me cry, oh my God, poor thing.

AND NOW THERE'S-AND KISSING AND-UNBUTTONED??? AND HIPBONES AND ERECTIONS AND SDFGHJKLA; WHA.

I'm about to fall apart soon what is this what's happening to me oh dear.

Tyler!!!! What even are you doing, baby boy?

You know how I told you I liked the innocence? Yeah, I want that back. I don't want their relationship to come to ruin.
Please.

AH I'M SCreaming yes

:c MICHAEL NEED TO LET TYLER LOVE HIM ITs ;-;

heroes. said it all, really.

Michael, Michael, Michael.... He's so stupid. "And that's all I have to say... about that." (Forrest Gump reference, what of it?)

Poor Tyler. Baby. Like, come snuggle with Felix , it's okay.

Gah, you just ripped me to shreds with this chapter. Which was great. Just gah!

MICHAEL NO.

Listening to Where Did I Go Wrong? by Heartist as I read this chapter didn't help me at all because all I could think was oh Michael I know where you went wrong. And well, yeah, I'm just gonna sob now because this is not good, this is not going well.

Tyler is absolutely adorable, just adorable, but Michael is so protective and worried and it just makes me feel so sad and oh, oh boy. I love the way that this is written, seriously, the style is so perfect, and the dialogue, oh. I'm just falling deeper in love with each update. This is so perfect.

But during this chapter, I just felt something was going to go wrong when Tyler took three hours to get those darned supplies. I felt it in my gut that something was about to smack me in the face. AND THEN. AAAH FRICK.

Tyler's just so. . .so aw and I want to snuggle him tightly because he needs it, he definitely deserves it, and then Michael's caught up in what can and cannot be, and I understand, because I'm assuming that's how he was raised and how most of the people in this place have been raised, but nonono, Michael, no, he's not in the wrong. You are. Youuuu are. Screw the society. Sarah's not a harlot, Sarah gave him the push and you gave him a push into the ground, goddammit, Michael.

"He was asleep on the bed with tear-stained cheeks – his clothes were still on, so he must have cried himself to sleep."



you're trying to kill me. you must be.

But the last bit, the nightmare bit, it warmed my heart. the last line no what do you mean there is no last line shh there is nothing that michael said no there was just cuteness and calming down

This chapter made me so sad :((
Poor Tyler. He didn't know
Michael's being rude >:((
This is such an amazing story. I can't wait for the next update!

I started reading this today and I can easily say this is one of the most unique fanfictions I've ever read. It's such an unusual yet brilliant story line and I am so excited to see where you go with this. I'm also extremely happy that you chose to use Tyler and Michael as the pairing for this story as I haven't seen many fanfictions featuring this ship and I personally love them. Update soon please, cant wait to read on!

I cannot express my love for this story. I'm.speechless. Everything about it is so unique and I love that it's going to be dark and twisty. I've been feeling lately that all the fanfiction I read is basically based on the exact same idea over and over again, but this story strays from that path. And not to mention that it's Michael and Tyler (yay), and there is a lack of Issues fanfics on this website. I'm really excited to see what you have in store for this story <3

First off, the innocence. I thought at first I might not like it like kids, and I can't stand kids too often but you do it with such finesse, that I love this even more. I'm, like, five lines in as I write this. I also like the way that the townspeople talk. Very old fashioned. It's a nice touch. The journal entries are also a great thing. I love the worry Michael exhibits. He, I suppose you could say, loves Tyler, even if he is a creation. (It's creepy to think of it that way, but it's kind of true.) I cannot wait for another update.

I can't even begin to express my love for this chapter, or this story in general. It's so cute and amazing and wow I love it.
Tyler's so cute in this and Michael is sweet because he just wants to protect Tyler aw.
Just, sometimes I feel like I don't understand why everyone is scared of Michael. Is it because he makes the marionettes or??
But either way, this is so cute and I anxiously await each update.