The Conductor - Comments

I can't even begin to express my love for this chapter, or this story in general. It's so cute and amazing and wow I love it.
Tyler's so cute in this and Michael is sweet because he just wants to protect Tyler aw.
Just, sometimes I feel like I don't understand why everyone is scared of Michael. Is it because he makes the marionettes or??
But either way, this is so cute and I anxiously await each update.

michael and tyler omg OTP haha

i cant wait for the next chapter!

With little reminders that no, things aren't exactly normal, this is still it's own sense of adorable and I absolutely love it. It's just innocence and learning for the first half and nothing to wrench your heart our just yet, more like things to calm you down and it's perfect. He's so ready to learn some geography, though, that's so asdghjklfeiswufwk.

The recordings of the progress being made, I didn't know why at first, but it gave me a sort of ominous feeling, and when I read on, I found it. "...I'm not a scientist, but..." That's it. It reminds me of a scientist, a mad doctor of sorts, and it makes me shiver even though nothing bad or even remotely frightening is being said. I love it, lovelovelove.

AW THE ADORABLE IS BACK. He had a nightmare asdghkl; oh poor baby (and the little stitch marks detail was a+ really found myself liking that a+ a+) and the nightmare sounds like the most unpleasant thing to experience, how about no.

"I’ll feel safer if you do…I promise that I’ll go to sleep if you do.” Nope I'm dead kay bye too cute nope nope nah nuh-uh no please revive me too cute I'm dead. The last line just killed me more, this was adorable and I loved it and wow and the little bit of cute thrown into the pain and perfection is just

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Back to school??? Oh, no! Well, I hope you enjoy the back to school time when it comes, and I hope things go good!!

I love the innocence exhibited. It's so perfect. I like the little comment about the stitch marks. It keeps it fresh that he is pieced together. The nightmare he has sort of seems familiar to something I've already read in the first four chapters maybe I'm just making that up, but I'm sure I did. Plus the fact that he is parts of other people adds the right edge to this story.

This gets better and more interesting with each chapter.

kddjkdsjfkJLKFD. all I have to say

i'm so in love with this already cries
this is amazing
i love the idea of michael as pretty much insane
this is so wonderful
ican't WAIT for the next update okay

@ heroes.
I love how you're always so hyped with your comments. It's amazing haha
Well, you know, you can't have everything being all peachy at the first moment, takes away from the small amount of suspense haha
Glad that you enjoyed this chapter c:

*screams*

*faints*

I think this is my favorite chapter. This one or the previous one, I'm not sure, but I just really love this chapter. Things are starting to get serious, things are happening and people are entering the story and it's just so good. I'm so ready for this and this was perfect and I just love this story. I have ended the battle within myself and I do believe this chapter is my favorite. The sense of disappointment I started to feel for Michael when things didn't seem right, dude. I felt so bad, he's so lonely and

But then things turned right around and waaaah, love it! I was feeling through this chapter, through them all really, and your style of writing is different and oh so good.

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
No, not creepy at all. :)
Glad you're enjoying the story so far haha

Oh goodness, yes. Is that creepy of me to say? Equal amounts eager and scared. Where you take this is literally anywhere and I cannot wait!

Oh my god, I'm so excited for this story! I'm loving the storyline, and that fact that Michael's the main character makes it even better. I love stories with dark twists, gah I can't wait!

I'm so excited. I'm so excited. I love darkness and it's going to be so, so good and I can't wait to see how deep and dark we're going to go. This is already so good and why, why do the people in the town have to talk about what they don't know, go away. This is so incredible already and is one of my favorites because it's so different and I just love your writing regardless, so I'm just.

Excuse me, I'm fangirling.

I can't wait, dude.

Okay, let me just say: YES!!! Following you in recreating Frankenstein's monster will definitely be really dark. I already love that, though. I really love how you start the thought process. But normally, you put some great plot twists, so I simply cannot wait!!

this is so fucking GREAT wth??? your fan fictions amaze me okay.

I don't necessarily know the ship. But regardless, I love your writing. And this second chapter. Wow. This is so amazing. I'm definitely curious as to how much darker your mind can get (in that creepy, good way). I just cannot wait!

THIS. IS. GONNA. BE. SO. FREAKING. GOOD.

I mean, of course, because you're such a good writer, but oh God am I excited for this. Not only is it more Tyler/Michael, but holy hell, it's different and sosososo good.

I AM SO EXCITED FOR THIS LIKE.

It sounded kind of creepy at first cause I didn't realize it was about marionettes.. But I love it so far! (: