Stockholm Syndrome - Comments

Okay, so I'm going to try and get all my thoughts out that I have, without it all sounding like gibberish. XD This story is.. amazing. It's not like the other ones on this site. When I read it, I feel like I'm reading an actual novel, not just some story that's on the internet. I love everything about this. The characters, the way they interact, it's so lifelike. And it doesn't seem fake. I also love the plot and how well you wrote it. You time everything perfectly. The kidnapping, the characters falling in love, the case invlolving Daniel's freedom. Even when Holly and Jayce fight. They don't get over it the next day with "omg im like so sorry." They take their own time and figure everything out. This story is absolutely perfect, and I really hope there's plenty more. Keep up the amazing work. :D

aww...I miss this story:( Do you think you'll write more, or no?

Yay!!!! I'm happy now:D I like Daniel's nickname for Holly. It's cute^_^

O_O

"He was working with his uncle on a large job a fair distance away"
oh damn...something is gonna happen!

"I don’t know it didn’t make sense to us. Jayce seemed to know what he was talking about though. "
HAA! I knew it..it was Jayce!

"I had waited all of three seconds after Daniel had walked in the door the next day to harass him about what I’d learn"
releaved that nothing happened...it would be too obvious;p

"Little did I know Jayce was the least of my worries. "
what? what? WHAAAAAAAT????

oh okay...but I have to let you know that that kinda scared me:p

*sigh*....I'm am SO happy you updated:D I love buddy! I have a German Shepherd puppy too, but he's now 6 months old....and already 60 pounds. He's big.
I love the scene when she's home alone and...it was just Shane and Ethan. I love her friends^_^
And I totally did not picture Jackson that way either, but I like it. He seems like he's going to be a good character.
I guess thats all I have to say today...Long live and prosper.

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... ^_^

ha i knew it was jayce.wow hes a creeper i mean serioulsy at her house but daniel was there <3

"Then I heard the noise again. But this time it was closer, louder and much more violent. "
that freaked me out!!

"“There’s something out here alright and it not a fucking bird.”"
hehe:p

...am still freaked cuz its 10pm now;p

"“No,” Daniel said quietly. His eyes glancing at me.|
he sawwwwwwww and I bet it was Jayce!!!

"It’s another to meet your mother’s boyfriend, the man who ruined your family and was really your father."
:((

"“What happened to your lip,” I gasped and he shrugged."
He went after Jayce and they got into a fight!! my imagination is in a roll tonight!!:p

"“Jayce…what happened to your eye?” I asked shocked slumping into the seat beside him. "
I KNEWWWWWWWWWWWWW ITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I'm so stocked now!! hahaha

cant wait for the next!!! hope you update SOOOOOON!!! :p

Oh MY GOSH!!!! That was LOOOONG!!!!! *snickers* Surrrrry.

*subscribes* How could I not after spending half my day reading it? I'm blaming you by the way...I was supposed to clean.... Haha oh well!
First of all... : D .....I'm not even going to try to explain how much I liked this cause I would just end up writing something retarded....that usually happens with me.
Anyway...I was hooked by the first chapter....you writing? Made of pure awesomeness(im not even sure if thats a word).....everyone has their own styles of writing and I absolutely adore yours:D
It's so captivating. I LOVED the first dozen chapters, I could NOT stop reading...and to be honest, I was worried that it would go downhill after he was found innocent but it totally didn't and I am happy :-D(proof) There is never a down moment!! and I love it....sorry I keep saying that, Im lame I know.
OH, and the chapter with the ninja/agent part? SO funny! I love Shane, he's awesome. Maybe you could put a picture of him on the character page? *shifty eyes**hint hint*
Oh...again...most people just jump into their stories and try to capture peoples attention right away but I loved that you took time in the beginning and laid a good foundation, especially for the characters. It was great all around......okay seriously....Im rambling....Ill stop!!!
Oh....I love Daniel and Holly, they're so cute together! And it's not like a lovey gushing relationship either...it's adorable and awesome.
Okay, I mean it...I'll stop now....yea, ok:-D Sorry for going on forever:D

Holy Mole this chapter was long! YEsssss score! Awesome chapter though...sooo cute, soul mates *sigh* n_n

awwweee they are so cute together

you seriously made me cry!!

:p
damn!!!

and I have to add this: "Dad had always been good at reading me."
he's a lawyer..of couse he's good at reading people!:P ....I just have a thing for lawyers..it's weird:p;p

I liked that her mom was there and explained but I still cant help but think that she could simply reply her calls. Even if she left her, she could answer the damn phone!

great update ;]

what what what??????
oh my GOD!!
WHAT HAPPENED???

update soooooooooooonnnnnn

I really really hope that her dad get full custody! ;/

It was a nice, long chapter...glad to read this story again. crossing my fingers for good luck:P;p
xoxo

hahah..my friend reacts the same way with roaches! loll:p

I really really hope everything goes well in court and she can stay with her father. Just because someone gave his semen, doesn't mean he's a father. Dad is the one who's there to listen to your first word, stays awake when you're ill..the one who watches you grow up.

I really hope she stays there. Also, it would be a good thing to see her, if "they" ask not to, they might think that her dad wanted it that way, so he can keep her. But if she sees her and still choses to live with her dad, she's show that she's determined.

xoxo

I've spent the past couple of days reading this
and
It's reeeeaaaallly good.
It's a diverse idea and I like it.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
:D

Great update. Can't wait for more.

I love it :D