This could use a beta, but I honestly really loved it. The ideas are so refreshing and well thought. I hope you'll update soon, because you're about a year late already! Keep up the good work (:
I really like where you are going with this story and I'm curious to see how you go about all the drama that unfolds after Christmas and such. Keep up the great work and update soon please
Prior reading your brilliant chapters and enduring your brilliant writing, I'm confused on why you don't have more reccomendations or a single comment (besides this one), it's a bit nerve racking when people don't take a notice to decent literature! Either way, this is a piece I will deffinitely be keeping track of. Also, great job on updating three times this week! I can barely even post three chapters without giving up on work, I can't wait for the sixth chapter.