If You Tell Me to Stay, I Will Stay Right Through - Comments

Hi there. Silent reader who manned up. Ran in to this story a few days ago. This is really good. It was funny how they were arguing about the bunks. Natalie sounds like a cool girl. I hope she gets saved. Please update. Matt has to win her back.

I really like this story hopefully you continue to write this. I can't wait to find out what happens. Hopefully she doesn't get kidnapped.

Please please please keep writing this!!

Please please please update soon. Don't stop writing this fic is awesome!

matt is still in the dog-house..
ooh, that was some thing to leave in ones bunk- and how the hell did he do it??
good thing though that she dropped it, zacky found it and then told the others.. just stupid of her to round the corner to get away from jasons prying eyes..
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I can't wait to see what'll happen now!

did jason get to her before the stupid guy managed to take her to the van after he knocked her out??
did he shoot at jason to keep him away?
did someone else come to her rescue? like hulk-matt?

OR is she taken??

i can honestly say, I've laughed out loud several times reading this story. Great plot line and capturing a7x's personalities! i love this story!

I have no clue why you're losing subscribers, I love this so much

well thank the heavens that val left again!! a few short days and she f*cked everything up.. as usual..! gaaaaah!!
coby.. he's.. yummy.. hehehe.. and sweet.. matt is right by being jealous! she should totally keep being friendly with him... that'll teach matt a lesson..
but oh.. he said that he loves her......... maybe not the best timing since she now thinks that he just said it to get another chance......
well... I hope he thinks about something real good to get himself back on her ''good-page'' because them two as simply friends??? hmmmm...

Wow Matt, you have successfully turned into a douche. How could you do that to natalie. Obviously you don't care about her so instead you play with her emotions. Grow some balls!!!

Yay Zacky!!! He is soo sweet!!

hahah zacky taking the phone was so funny!!
and him switching buses with matty b so that nat has someone that she knows a little better on the bus with her was so cute!! I kinda really do hope that stupid ass matt gets jealous of how close the two of them are..
and WHY THE FUCK IS VAL THERE??!! the stupid bitch!!
matt.. what the hell is his problem?? one minute he tells nat that he and val isn't in a relationship anymore, that it's just a piece of paper.. and then wham! there's val, causing big fuckin' trouble with just showing her face.. and what does matt do? nothin'!! does she have his fuckin' balls on lockdown in a frickin' box or something?? who the hell wears the pants??? O.o

sorry, i'm just waaaay too annoyed at matt now, since that's not the first time he's fucked up.....

OMG I can't believe Matt!! After everything that happened before I wouldn't think that he would pull some stupid shit like that. Zacky is such a good friend :) great update!!

I love it

Love the update. You're awesome! Keep updating. Can't wait for more updates!!

loved the update...

Hold on, are you star struck?” Matt gaped at me, pulling slightly away to look at my face.
“No.” I lied.
“Hey Rev!! She’s star struck dude!” Matt yelled over to Jimmy

Loved this! Hopefully someone witness her putting the guys in check. And doesn't let them hear the end of it lol.

johnny frickin' christ.. what a little baby.. hahahaha aawe at least natalie helped him score a bottom bunk! that gotta make him do as told a little quicker next time? heheh..
yeah.. jimmy.. he can get into any bunk.. and he's just so sweet all the time!!
woah! brian actually kind of defended her when she was starstruck over jacoby? darn! thought he'd make fun of her.. nice surprise!
and loved her reaction at getting a hug from coby and meeting him..
whaaa.. how the hell did the stupid fuck get her new number already??

Love this story!! Update soon!

Can't wait to see what happens with the creepy-picture-taking guy!!! Update soon pleaasseee

I love this story!!! It's so good, keep updating!!!

bahaha brian!! so mean to little johnny
aawe mattie ya can't expect to be sharing a room with natalie the first night! that'd be so weird and she'd probably be totally twitchy and stuff
val... gah! she just wont give up!!
and dude following them around, taking pics.. creepy!! O.o