If You Tell Me to Stay, I Will Stay Right Through - Comments

  • helena_88

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    hah, so she managed to catch her off guard.. >_< val the little cat- scratching with her claws..
    uuh, yeah.. going to the pub that early?? mattie what have you got up your sleeve?? XD
    August 21st, 2014 at 11:25am
  • jacklynnirene

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    Aaaahmahgaaaah!!! I'm already in love with this story. Your character is already so believable and I love how you portray the guys. It's so refreshing finding such a good story, especially just a few chapters in! I absolutely can't wait for more!!
    August 21st, 2014 at 09:46am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Mean? No.
    Val is psycho!
    And a total hypocrit
    She's just lucky Natalie didn't rip her eyes out
    Wonder what the guys are going to say when they find out
    August 21st, 2014 at 06:18am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I am loving it more and more! Please update soon!
    August 20th, 2014 at 01:03am
  • Synful_Shadows

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    Hahahahahahahahahahaha!!! Synyster-what's-his-name that had me right there!

    I can just imagine Brian's face when she said that. XD

    Amazing! xx
    August 19th, 2014 at 05:47pm
  • helena_88

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    seriously they're so cheeky and funny!! XD
    I totally smiled just by reading the chapter title!
    their reactions to her talking about avenged were priceless!
    and matts comment about her in a uniform.. dear lord! how in the hell is she going to keep herself from jumping him while living under the same roof as him??
    dunno if they knowing about her is a good or bad thing yet though.... Cute
    August 19th, 2014 at 11:06am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Aha they thought they fooled her! I laughed when Natalie said Shadz sounds girly! Anyways awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
    August 19th, 2014 at 09:23am
  • helena_88

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    Aaawe poor mattie bear!! his wife fucked him over Sad and now he doesn't want to be alone in that big scawwy house.. ( Cute )
    oooh yeah.. how will she be able to keep that a secret if matt goes with her to pack up her shit? XD
    August 18th, 2014 at 09:15pm
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    I feel so bad for Matt! And ohh he's asking to move in, that's gonna be great. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one.
    August 18th, 2014 at 04:52am
  • helena_88

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    okay seriously two chapters in and i find this hilarious already! XD so since it will be okay is on hiatus now- i'm not all that super sad since this one seems awesome as well Cute
    August 17th, 2014 at 07:21pm
  • melxin

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    Sad to see "it will be okay" on hiatus, but i love this!! i'm really exited to see where it goes!!
    August 17th, 2014 at 03:00pm
  • jettabug

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    I stumbled upon this by chance, and I must admit, I'm intrigued! I like where this is going, and I love how you've described Matt. I want to see where this is going, and just how Natalie is going to fit into the equation.

    I'd love to see you continue with this and how you fit Natalie's background into it. Good job.
    August 17th, 2014 at 12:10pm
  • Deep.Black

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    already in love with this story... hope you update soon :D
    August 17th, 2014 at 11:42am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    I love this so far!! I can't wait for more.
    August 17th, 2014 at 10:43am
  • Synful_Shadows

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    I LOVE THIS!!!!! JIMMY IS SOOO FUNNY!!! XD
    August 17th, 2014 at 09:11am