August 28th, 2014 at 08:15pm
He was ready for a big let down let down should be one word
Slapping the blade of his goalie stick once against each goalpost, he lowered himself into his semicrouch and yelled, “Bring it on.” semicrouch should be two words.
he’d either snap the puck over on of their shoulders or cut hard on should be one.
Usually that meant a shooter was going to try to deke, rather than shoot, but Tyler, whose puckhandling wasn’t as nimble as Andrew’s, almost always shot. puckhandling should be two words.
He wound up for a slapshot. I think slapshot should be two words too.
We’d love for you to be apart of the team. apart should be a part lol another two worder.
run down should be one word.
That's all the mistakes I found. Most of those one/two word problems don't really bother anyone too much, so I think you did a good job writing this, and I love the rivalry between Andrew and Tyler you've set up.
Okay. Thank you! I will go back and fix these mistakes! And feel free to catch anymore and let me know. I don't want the mistakes to remain there!
I'm glad you liked Andrew and Tyler's rivalry. I worked really hard to figure out how to best introduce Tyler and I thought, hey why not give him a rivalry with someone! ;)