omgomgomgomg.no no no, NO she dosent get to dy.please tell me she is going to servive this, and go be hapy ever after with connor. XDXDX suspense, is the cat killer not fucking curiosity.XDXDX
aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! what no, god, UPDATE, the suspence is killing, is mia going to be ok, my god the baby is it going to be ok, is ist connors or erik's,shit,XDXD this is so on point,XDXDXD, i cant wait for more. and yes there is nothing wrong with the spanish, everything seems right.
@ ichig0ichie24 Beatrice is completely lesbionic. She loves Eric in an overly platonic fashion. She always wanted an older brother and happened upon one bleeding on the side of the road on one of her family trips. ^_^
I hope I can express that more in the chapters to come. Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment because I know people are weird about it. I just really love to hear from my readers though! Subscribe for automatic updates on when I update. Recommend and spread the word *Appa yip-yip!*
Aww this is cute. I really want to see what happens in this love triangle. And Beatrice is a lesbian? I thought she had a thing for Eric. Secretly though..
This is really on point, you have nothing to worry about. i'm loving the story line, and the characters are amazing, i literally cant stop reading. i'm scared to finish lol.
@ Irony Thanks I really tried hard. This is probably the most descriptive story I've written. The rest of my stories look more like plays than stories:P. Lemme know if anything needs to be clarified. I always go back and edit.
@ deathXbeforeXdisco Honestly I'm pretty sure it's because people find comments tedious. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment though! I'm trying to like churn all of this out before I lose my inspiration and it dies like a lot of my other stories did. Keep reading and if there's anything, and I mean anything, that you think I could improve on please let me know. ^_^
Seriously??? This has no comments??? What the hell is wrong with these people?? Your story is amazing and I honestly cannot wait to read more. Mia is lovely, I am in love with Eric and B is awesome. Now Connor... One minute I love him, one minute I hate him! He's the perfect character! Hahaha :) In any case, this is a wonderful story and I'm so glad I gave it a shot :)