Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take - Comments

@ Flickering Lights
thank you :D

@ bobobo
That's such a big compliment, oh my god. I know how that feels as a reader when you're so excited that someone updated, so that means the world to me. I agree they're digging themselves into a deeper hole, and even though they know it it's not stopping them.

@ santi santi
I totally agree, because Cherie was smart and tried to get away. But Patrick is charming as fuck and she's in love with him so here she is. Is Patrick selfish for letting this go on? Probably, but Cherie doesn't mind.

@ bedussey
I haven't decided what Patrick's going to do yet. I hope that he'd at least break it off with his wife, but maybe he's too scared. They're both blinded by how selfishly they want each other that they're not taking anything else into consideration and that's a problem. Especially because Cherie doesn't know much about Patrick, even still, and she's never dealt with his lifestyle and him being famous. So even if they ended up together who knows if she would be able to handle it all.

oh, they're definitely going to get hurt even worse this time, I can already tell. they can only keep up this charade for so long. poor Cherie, I felt so bad for her when she started crying

part of me HOPES he'll will sort everything out, but we all know Patrick is an angel (most of the time) and probably won't have the guts to break it off with his wife and/or tell her about Cherie. I really hope he does, though. I can literally feel the ache in my chest when you describe the unfairness of the whole situation and how it's weighing down the both of them.

Patrick is digging his hole deeper and deeper

ohhh. i wonder how long patrick can keep this from his wife, i mean, girls find out everything eventually right? but in the mean time, more sneaking around! :)))

I love everything you write. Seriously I get so happy when you update you've written my favorite Patrick fics on here. I'd love to see them drag this out a little while longer; it's so exciting and sad. I feel like there's definetly the chance to get caught and at least the first time they had the chance to move on. They're digging themselves into a deeper hole I'd say.

Love it :3

@ Ali Cat
Can't wait

@ santi santi
Thank you!!!!!! I'm so excited for this I don't think you guys know how ready I am for this!!!

@ busquets16
Hopefully I can get the second chapter out Tuesday or Wednesday!!!!!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEE

This is so freaking perfect. I have no other words than that.

@ bedussey
You know, I haven't quite decided how long it'll be. I'm thinking at least a few chapters. I sort of have an idea of where it'll go, but I don't know how long it'll take to get there. They are taking a risk, and Patrick's an idiot because Cherie was smart and left before he could break her heart. Now it's starting all over again only worse. I hope she doesn't get hurt too

@ Stumpslumps01
Thank you so much!! I'm happy about this too! :D

@ bobobo
Thank you, that's a really big compliment. This was something I wanted to explore because I'm guilty of writing Patrick as a little angel too. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but I just thought it would be kind of cool to try to write him as deceitful. Hopefully you guys like it! :)

@ milesandmaisy
eeekkk I love him too :D

*sobbing* I love Patrick

AND SO IT BEGINS

is this one gonna be a full fledged story or another short little one? either way, I'm excited. I'm happy they're both together again, but I'm also anxious because they're taking such a risk...I hope Cherie doesn't get hurt in the end

Just wow! Totally amazing!!

*screams* it's so awesome to see another take on Patrick. There aren't a lot of other stories that portray him as anything other than this passive angel I'm so wxcited!

More more more!
I'm so happy about this one

@ bedussey
GIRL I KNEW YOU WOULD BE

OH SHIIIIT I'M SO READY FOR THIS