I'm falling in love with this story. I just love the way you write it, simple and tongue-in-cheek. I really like Harley and Spencer's friendship and I love seeing them joke around and tell stories in between the heartfelt stuff (which was my favorite part about this chapter, by the way, I really appreciate the messages of women's capability and the fact that love doesn't weaken you, they were just perfectly articulated)
anyway I'm so glad my comment made you happy! like I said, I'm really enjoying this story and you should have no reason to be nervous about it at all because it's fantastic so far. it's unlike any other fic I've read!
I was so happy when I saw that you had updated this and let me tell you I was not disappointed. I love this story and it's only two chapters in. I also really liked what you wrote about the housewife comment, it was very beautiful. I cannot wait to read more and I loved the interaction between the two and how well and effortless they get along.
@ bedussey your comment made waking up for work at 5am so much easier and you had me in a good mood all day. it also got me to haul ass on the next chapter 'cause i've been so uncertain about it.
i'm so so happy you're liking the story and the concept so far! i've always wanted to write something like this but have always been too nervous to. can i also say i'm completely overjoyed that you found my humor funny and in character? geek mode activated.
Spencer doesn't get nearly enough love despite being such an awesome guy but here's to trying.
ugh Spencer is the love of my life. you're right, there's not enough stories about him on here. I reeeally like this so far, especially the end of this chapter, it was just so...poetic? in the least cheesy sense of the word. I just really love the idea of the two of them meeting by chance every so often.
I think my favorite line so far was:
"Who the fuck breaks their leg riding their bike? What is he, 12? Doesn't he drink milk?"
holy fuck I literally laughed out loud because I read it in Ryan's voice and it just killed me. AND THE PART ABOUT HIS FLIP FLOPS GETTING STUCK IN THE PEDAL OH MY GOD THAT IS SO JON
god I just miss Panic! stories. thank you for writing this <3
@ Famous Friend. Right?? After browsing around and finding hardly anything for him I knew it just wouldn't do. Spencer deserves a lot more love than he gets! Thank you so much! I was really iffy about posting this 'cause I've been out of practice but I'm so happy that you're enjoying it so far. Reading your comment put a smile on my face after coming home from a long day :)
I have to agree there needs to be more Spencer stories and I am so glad that you're writing one!!! The first chapter is amazing and I love Harley as a character. I cannot wait to read more and see how this story develops.
P.S also I love your layout and banner very much.
October 1st, 2014 at 03:12am
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