When We Were Seventeen - Comments

You are seriously my favorite author on this site. Never stop writing these stories!!!!!!

I've been so busy I wasn't able to gather my thoughts until now. But here I am *cracks knuckles* Let's get into it shall we.

Let me first say that your writing is amazing. Yeah, this scene was hot as all gay frottage scenes between your OTP are but there was also something elegant about the way you wrote it; even though you used the word 'shit' almost 20 times omg. It was fitting though, there wasn't really any other word besides 'fuck' that would have captured how Matt felt about the situation.

I also love how Matt helped Brian get off afterwards. That's promising. This is all new but the way he didn't just leave Brian hanging even though Brian was like it's okay gives me hope. And please "Brian's stick shift" made me laugh out loud. Oh, teenaged boys. The fact that Brian kept his promise and Matt's number is still there on his skin is also super cute.

But okay, because I know your style having read all three of your longer bratt stories here at least twice and counting, I know good things don't last long with you. *glares loudly* While this is cute and hot and giggle worthy, there's always going to be a part of me that's worried. This is Matt's first foray if you will into a tentative relationship with someone of the same sex, and just because he likes Brian somewhat doesn't mean he's over the crush he has on Val. And plus, since this was all done in private, Matt could deny it. I don't want to think he's /that/ much of an asshole though. It's so early and I want to be happy for them but I can't help but be worried ugh. Especially with that warning about Val you gave us early.

I feel like it's still too early for me to tell how it's really going to go down, but you asked for thoughts so there you have it! I'm excited for how it unfolds, and even if there's a shit load of angst, I know you'll make up for it with the ending. God, seeing this story updated is the highlight of my week right now. Thanks so much for writing bratt we need so much more of that in the world.

Looking forward to the next chapter! I absolutely love this!

I loved the awkwardness and weirdness between them but I'm also glad that they really like each other and there's no regrets. Looking forward to more soon xx

I loved the chapter! Although I will admit that nipple piercings weird me out. Not sure why, probably because I can't think about them without thinking 'Jesus Christ, ow'.

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH yay!!!!!!!!!!!! they did something more and Matt was okay with it...yeah he freaked a little after brian came but hey he's knew he's not used to someone elses. THe shits made it more real

Holy shit!!!!! This was unbelievably good!!! Omg, I loved it!!! I was a lil worried that Matt would totally freak out and hit Bri or something like that. Even tho he initiated it, I was still a lil worried. But this was fucking awesome and perfect!!!! More smut please!!!!! Multiple shits fitted in perfectly in the story!!!

I thought Matt would freak out and maybe reject Brian at first but he didn't (yay) :) I'm so happy he didn't because this chapter was hot as hell! Hhis is my favorite fanfiction now. UPDATE NOWWWWWWW OR I'LL DIE

Shit, that was a hot chapter (see what I did there :P ) Matt is such a newbie it's adorable!!! And I loved that he was willing to try stuff and then he got all freaked out and cute!!! I really, really can't wait to see where you go with this story :) it's exciting and I want the next chapter now!!!! <3

Well holy fucking shit!!! I wasn't expecting Matt to take the lead on that, but so glad he did!!! It was insanely hot!! Just the way their hormones are driving each other crazy!! I wonder how Matt will be the next day and how their next time is gonna work!! I'm so pumped for this story BC all though it's a bratt that you write so well, it's so much different than normal and I love it!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Well holy fucking shit!!! I wasn't expecting Matt to take the lead on that, but so glad he did!!! It was insanely hot!! Just the way their hormones are driving each other crazy!! I wonder how Matt will be the next day and how their next time is gonna work!! I'm so pumped for this story BC all though it's a bratt that you write so well, it's so much different than normal and I love it!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Gosh that was hot! And they're already cute together. I'm really curious as to how this is going to go now. Can't wait for the next update.

I'm in love with this! Update soon please!

OMFG! That was so amazing, I grinned big when they kissed. Matt was so funny xD Their convos are great! <33
Keep up the good work! I'm in love <3

OMFG! That was so amazing, I grinned big when they kissed. Matt was so funny xD Their convos are great! <33
Keep up the good work! I'm in love <3

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THEY KISSSSSSSSSEDDD!!!!!!!! I think val kinda knows like I dont know but from what I read matt doesnt make it not obivous of him checking brian out

You wouldn't believe how excited I was when I saw there's 4th chapter! It's amazing. And after I read it ... yay, they kissed! I can't wait to read more, keep writing, you have great style. And I also like that you have longer chapters :)

Omg!!! They finally kissed!!! Bout damn time!!! Lol this chapter was prefect!!! I just hope Matt doesn't chicken out later or be a dick to Brian to save face!!! Updates soon!!!

OK, how am I so late to the party!? I just read all the chapters available and holy crap its so good!! I knew it would be because I love all if your stuff!!
I don't think these two cold feet any more awkward/cute with each other. I just really really enjoy thus while story so far!! I'm super excited to see where you take this! I can't wait for the next update! Great writing!!

They are so cute, holy shit.