February 8th, 2015 at 04:28am
When We Were Seventeen - Comments
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Great chapter :) I really loved it!!! The bit at the end was adorable!!! They are perfect together, no two ways about it it!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!February 8th, 2015 at 12:51am
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I liked this chapter. It was cute, but I do have one huge issue with it.
Brian's budget for this apartment is unrealistic. One, he works two jobs and he gets a lot of hours in both. It's been built into the story that he probably pretty much works two full times jobs with the amount of hours he gets. California requires tipped employees to get minimum wage before tips, so he's making at least 9 dollars an hour at both jobs. There's no way he can't afford more than 800 a month and there's no way he'll find a place for less than a grand a month. Actually, unless he wants to live in a trailer park, he won't find anything for less than like, 1350 and that's going super cheap and not being in Huntington Beach. I know that this is nitpicky of me, but as someone that's currently apartment hunting, it's bothering me.February 7th, 2015 at 08:51pm -
Awww bout time!!!! They're so damn cute and Brian is just perfect!!! Zaky's a dork, I'm hoping they when Matt brings about school, Bri doesn't get stupid!!!February 7th, 2015 at 06:31pm
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was cute at the end and adorable.....I mean yeah zack made it weird by saying they should move in together but zack's a weirdo like thatFebruary 7th, 2015 at 06:09pm
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Brilliant .... Just brilliant! Please update again soon. xxxFebruary 7th, 2015 at 04:54pm
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yeah.. they're just too frickin' adorable!!
and zacky pointing out that they should get a place together.. might've been too soon?? well..February 7th, 2015 at 01:38pm -
I love jimmy!! He is the bestest friend ever!!! I'm glad their lovin' has gotten better!! But what is thus devastation?!? I don't know if I can handle that!!January 30th, 2015 at 01:56pm
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Jimmy is adorable, I love his character so much. Brian's and Matt's relationship is so fucking cool. Oh my god.
Possibly devestating? I don't like that!January 30th, 2015 at 07:10am -
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww they are so cute and I'm glad jimmy knows about Matt and Brian doing the deed. I really think Brian should bottom once so matt can feel how it's like ot be inside. But I like the fact that Matt is dominating but also not at the same timeJanuary 29th, 2015 at 07:20pm
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Very cute. Although I am kind of hoping that Matt eventually tops at least once. I was actually surprised that Matt started out bottoming and that he's only bottomed in this relationship since everything about him seems like he'd be more comfortable topping.January 29th, 2015 at 06:25pm
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Amazing update as always!!!!January 29th, 2015 at 06:10pm
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Matt frowned. “Is it okay to talk about this? It’s not weird?”
Jimmy shrugged his shoulder. “I’m not weird. Are you weird?”
LMAO!! I FRICKIN' LOVE JIMMY!!
they're having it so good right now, matt and brian, that i'm kinda just waiting for something to come and fuck it up for a bit O.oJanuary 29th, 2015 at 04:45pm -
awwwwwwwwwww that was a better way for them to have sex and it was sooo perfect. I can't wait for moreJanuary 20th, 2015 at 07:04pm
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I loved the chapter. Although for a second I thought they'd been fucking for an hour instead of just like, having a ton of foreplay and I was like, "LOL WHAT?" But then I kept reading and I was like, "Oh, no, this makes sense."January 20th, 2015 at 04:28am
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This update was amazing!!! Their relationship CAN AND WILL STAY PERFECT!!!! Please don't do anything to change that!!! That was the most beautiful love making I've ever read between two men!!!! Loved it!!!!January 19th, 2015 at 04:51pm
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Oh no.. Don't say that! Because then something is definitely gonna happen and I won't be able to handle that, fuck.
ZACK GOT TO DANCE WITH MICHELLE! BRB DYING HAPPILY!January 19th, 2015 at 03:31pm -
Can their perfect relationship last forever? Don't mess with my happy feels when I just got them back!!! They need to be happy!! That was perfect :) I'm so glad this time was better!!! Great chapter :) can't wait for more!! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes!! And aww Zack got to dance with Michelle :DJanuary 19th, 2015 at 12:36pm
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Really loved this chapter :) they are just so adorable together!!! And the suspense - will they dance together? Won't they? It was killing me!!!! I'm so happy that they did :) can't wait for more!!!January 15th, 2015 at 05:03am
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I was just thinking about this story last night!! This was such a perfect update!!! It was amazing!!January 15th, 2015 at 01:31am
I don't actually live in America so all I can do is research. It's kind of annoying that despite the massive amount of research I have done - every place mentioned is a real place in Huntington Beach - goes unnoticed but the one thing that isn't 100% correct is what you pick up on.
I appreciate you reading my story but for the most part, your comments are quite critical.
Thanks for the feedback.