Room 608 - Comments

Wow so a friend of mine reccommended that I read this story a while back.
I'm just getting into it sadly but if it makes any kind of difference, I love it already.
Ah, so update soon of you can! I'll definitley be waiting.

Right so I'm reviewing this because you won my contest

I'm not a fan of this type of story or the writing style; but that's personal preference but you've pulled them both of well and kept me interested, if you han't odds are I'd have picked a different one to review :tehe:

Plot wise; It's definatly interesting and not seen often. I like it and I quite like where it'd headed. I'm pretty much in love with the first chapter; the introduction to your character and the situation.

If I were giving you stars for this story it'd easily be a nine :cute:

I'm sorry this took a while, I'll get the other review done asap :cute:

Ah. I forgot I could update. Sorry.
I will try harder and I might possibly be able to get an update up at some point soon. I don't know...
Amazing story, you've got me hooked.

-Kyla.

I am in love with this story, it's so amazing, and I really like it so much. Please continue! Bellamy rocks, people. Seriously.

Please update this!!
I love both these fics so much and i am craving more dammit!!

Please update this!!
I love both these fics so much and i am craving more dammit!!

Wow, this is just as awesome as it's companion.
I can tell right now that these two Merryweather fics are going to be my obsession for as long as you guys keep writing them, and then probably months after you stop.
They are so different and freaky! They kind of remind me of the episode of Supernatural: Asylum, which freaked the hell out of me, in a good way.
Please keep writing, this is amazing and deserves 10 stars, no sweat.

Haha, you can so totally see Bellamy being the freaky kid at school xD
Him & Dom are what I'm reading this for; so keep it up =D

Lovely. Pretty amazing. More soon?

more soon, yes?
<3

Amy love it i want more but what is with the link to the picture of Joe Lean? he's like well sweaty. well i guess that turns you on doesnt it the ? ha

That was rather ingenious, if I do say so myself. My fav character is a fight between Bellamy and Spencey. The falling asleep thing, and the drawing on veins shit? Amazingly hilarious. *subscribes* Can't wait for more!

I love this already. I love Crooked Halos too, but that's not what's supposed to be in my comment, is it?
Anyway...
I really liked how you introduced everyone, and I want to read more about this room on the MerryWeather institute
More soon please *suscribes*

Okay, first of, bravo for that
I liked the long descrip. very much much, it kept me interested and I what surprised me is, I thought it was an original fic but when I saw the layout I was mistaken, obviously :tehe:

Okay, so... Chappy One:

My name is Joshua Farro and I have been waiting on Death Row for exactly seven hundered and forty two days, nineteen hours and eleven minutes for a crime that I did not commit. I like this line because the fact that he's been counting how long he's been waiting

That wouldn't have been enough for a judge, but my finger prints were found on the bullet and on the rooftop on which the shooter had perched. This was no case of mistaken identity. I had been framed. Last line I felt was really strong. Is it bullet or gun? I don't know, maybe it was intended or a typo, bu great line nonetheless.

Favorite line: My hand is unsteady as I write, and the words almost illegible, but it does not matter, so long as the truth is told.

Chappy 2:

Surely that wasn't so frightening, even if Zac wasn't the bravest of people. Well...not if he had a knife sticking out of his neck. I can understand the screaming. :lmfao I love this line so much just 'cause it's funny.

I also liked the way you introduced everybody to the story :tehe: Shpeshaly the Mikey/Gerard part, that was hilarious :lmfao

Just before lights out, some blond haired kid was shoved into the room so fast that I hardly saw the warden. Everbody looked up, and he rubbed the back of his neck sheepishly.

"Hi...I'm Dom." :cheese: Way to finish a chapter! Dang.... wonder what happens next.

Chappy 3:

"My name is Dominic Howard..." he had scarcely let his surname roll off his tongue before Jepha cut him off.

"That's my surname too! My name is Jepha Howard." :tehe: This made me think if there was a reason why you named him that....

"WILL YOU TWO JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP!" That was Mikey, who promptly threw a book across the room which hit me in the forehead. "IF THIS DOESN'T END NOW, GERARD WILL END IT!" :lmfao :lmfao :tehe: :tehe:

.... Yeah.... I like the Mikey in this story. There's a real 'Little brother' quality in him and it makes Gerard really look like the older brother. Good job ~~

And dude... you made Josh and Bert kiss :shock: That's something new, I've never seen one for those before :XD

Update soon :cute: I wanna keep reading this! I wanna know how it endssssss!

I'm horrid in reviews, really.... sorry if this wasn't you were looking for :shifty

........... MORE! *subscribes*

you gona do any more ????

So far, very intriging and very intresting. Looking forward to more.