Yesss! Ryder and Jamie :):):) And damn freaking Aiden too blinded by love to care about Ryder's life. i mean I adore him so far but it's kinda pissing me off how he doesn't even give her the chance to tell him how she met this guy and stuff...
The way Jamie and Ryder interacts is gold! There is so much playfulness and wit, and that is like my life goals...
Writing's flawless as always and yessssss awaiting their "date"!
Yes! And Jamie date! And he's such a liar, it's not as friends... Actually come to think of it, I don't think Ryder wants it to be just as friends either. Excited for the next one!
Wow, you are a talented writer! I was hooked the way you started the story, I did not expect to be reading that when I clicked on the link to chapter 1. ... I never thought I'd end up reading a Jamie Benn story, I see him everywhere on tumblr, and ugh I was getting sick of it, and then I see this bad boy on the stories page, and was like... "what the hey, why not?"
DAMN. I am hooked! I normally steer clear of stories with tough love characters, the ones that are full of anger and take it out on everyone, but I couldn't not continue (did that sound weird? hopefully it made sense though) // I just wanna see how you continue to write Ryder, and how her character development will go, I'm just excited for that. And I can definitely feel Jamie's frustration with her, and her inner struggles with him on her mind! And before the 'first kiss' happened I was wondering how the kiss would happen when it came down to it, and for some reason I didn't even think that a verbal fight would be the one to lead to the kiss. That moment was pretty intense, but I'm not gonna lie, I LOL'd when he was like, "I hate you."
You got yourself a new subscriber! I quite like this story! I especially like the fluff you manage to sneak in!
I love that Ryder is flawed - that she has a lot of demons to slay - but that you can see that deep down she really wants someone to care. As tough and independent as she talks, Ryder just wants to feel safe and secure - the way she seems to feel every time Jamie is around.
It is exhausting keeping that hard shell up. Sometimes it is nice to be able to let your guard down and unburden yourself
Omg this is amazing ! Like seriously. You make me wish the chapters never ended. They're so good !! I love how you have both their points of views. And dear lord the chemistry and hatred between the two is beyond amazing ! Your story is addicting and I love it !! Can't wait for the next update.