I love that she has such a hard exterior shell. Most stories that start out with the characters like that usually give in a few chapters in, so I'm glad to see that she is going to remain a little tough! Really good so far!
Really enjoy it. For some reason I almost get the feeling that she and her family were relatively important before the kids got into drugs and the mother died. I don't know. She says she has awesome insurance : ) Great story though
I don't even know where to start with writing a comment about this story so far, it's just…wow. It's original and not like most hockey player fiction. Sure Jamie Benn is a very pretty man to stare at ;) and he usually gets paired with a perky little blonde (which is really annoying ahha), but Ryder gets under his skin really easily. She's proud, strong, opinionated, and brash - not the typical characteristics of a Jamie Benn 'love'. And I think that's perfect! She weaselled her way into his head and clearly both aren't done thinking about the other. I like that Ryder challenged Jamie within seconds of meeting him. She's got huge walls up for all the right reasons, but there has to be something (*cough* Jamie *cough*) that slowly chips away at that. I can't see her giving in too easily though, she will definitely put up a fight! I can't wait to see the direction this goes - Ryder is just such a great character! :D
Really love this, I hope that this isn't just a one-shot because I can see this story going far. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next post.