How to Kiss a Girl for Beginners - Comments

I love your story so far!!

This story is absolutely beautiful. Your writing style runs the fine edge between elegant and modernized-hilarity. The sentence: "their itching fists were going to definitely pummel me in a way that would make Darwin proud", made me absolutely lose it. The plot, so far, seems very well thought out, and the characters all are lovable from first words (Yes, including Viper - who might just be my favourite of the lot!). I will be recommending this story to everyone, and cannot wait for you to continue. Best wishes!