I really love Selina's attitude, and you described it perfectly. Although I'd like to know a little more about her. I'd also wished to see a bit more detail to show through. But never the less this has a really good plot, with the cheerleader and the teacher. I like that you use third person, since I don't see it much anymore, which really brings out your writing style. Lastly I really love your layout, it doesn't draw attention to the story and is just really pretty with the banner.
Your layout for this story, is simply beautiful. And, the banner is absolutely amazing. I love your writing style, it's completely flawless and just beautiful all it's own. I can imagine every chapter perfectly. And, might I say Selina and I would never get along. Not my type of girl. Haha But I love this story, and I will be a regular reader and comment!
This story has loads of potential from what you've written so far, you set the scene amazingly and I like the way you write Selina's character as well. Everything flows great, and it just keeps you asking questions as you read, which keeps the reader coming back for more :)
Your writing is absolutely flawless. I don't think I've ever so soon hated a character. Selina is like the worst person ever. That just means you've done your job though, so congrats! haha
This whole story line does seem a bit cliche, which is fine, but I don't find myself going to read any further.
I'd be willing to put money on the amount of screaming the assistant coach gets though, haha.
hmmm, just who was that she bumped into in the hallway?
i seriously love Selina! she's so funny, and from what you've told me, i know she's only going to get better and better and i can't wait! i also can't wait for the official introduction of Gabriel.
dudeeee. you told me selina was going to be horrible, and you were right! what a meanie! hahaha. but she's entertaining so far, and i can tell there's no part of her that's going to bore me.