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  • bailey08

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    i really like this!
    January 5th, 2015 at 04:36am
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    i really like this!
    January 5th, 2015 at 04:36am
  • aubree james.

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    HEY YOU! Update this story? I seriously miss it. :(
    January 2nd, 2015 at 03:44pm
  • risque;

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    I really love Selina's attitude, and you described it perfectly. Although I'd like to know a little more about her. I'd also wished to see a bit more detail to show through. But never the less this has a really good plot, with the cheerleader and the teacher. I like that you use third person, since I don't see it much anymore, which really brings out your writing style. Lastly I really love your layout, it doesn't draw attention to the story and is just really pretty with the banner.
    December 22nd, 2014 at 10:17pm
  • Lalaster

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    Your layout for this story, is simply beautiful. And, the banner is absolutely amazing. I love your writing style, it's completely flawless and just beautiful all it's own. I can imagine every chapter perfectly. And, might I say Selina and I would never get along. Not my type of girl. Haha But I love this story, and I will be a regular reader and comment!
    December 12th, 2014 at 04:45am
  • AlyShadows

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    I love Selina stomping around like a little brat. And her barging into the boys locker room. XD Girl's got no shame! But it's great.

    WHO IS THE ASSISTANT COACH? tehe I can't wait for more!
    December 11th, 2014 at 04:11am
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    I love Selina stomping around like a little brat. And her barging into the boys locker room. XD Girl's got no shame! But it's great.

    WHO IS THE ASSISTANT COACH? tehe I can't wait for more!
    December 11th, 2014 at 04:11am
  • Sparklingbows

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    Love this so far! Can't wait for it to be updated! Mr. Green
    December 11th, 2014 at 03:58am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    This story has loads of potential from what you've written so far, you set the scene amazingly and I like the way you write Selina's character as well. Everything flows great, and it just keeps you asking questions as you read, which keeps the reader coming back for more :)
    December 7th, 2014 at 07:47pm
  • Michael Westen

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    Your writing is absolutely flawless. I don't think I've ever so soon hated a character. Selina is like the worst person ever. That just means you've done your job though, so congrats! haha

    This whole story line does seem a bit cliche, which is fine, but I don't find myself going to read any further.

    I'd be willing to put money on the amount of screaming the assistant coach gets though, haha.
    December 4th, 2014 at 07:33pm
  • AlyShadows

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    hmmm, just who was that she bumped into in the hallway? tehe

    i seriously love Selina! she's so funny, and from what you've told me, i know she's only going to get better and better and i can't wait! i also can't wait for the official introduction of Gabriel.

    more soon, please! you're too amazing, doll. Cute
    November 25th, 2014 at 03:19am
  • MissyPrissy

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    I like her and her attitude so far... I can't wait to read more into the story!
    November 19th, 2014 at 04:11am
  • Brumous

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    I love bitchy characters so I love selina xD update soon
    November 11th, 2014 at 12:29am
  • AlyShadows

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    dudeeee. you told me selina was going to be horrible, and you were right! what a meanie! hahaha. but she's entertaining so far, and i can tell there's no part of her that's going to bore me.

    i can't wait to read more, cuzzo! update soon. Cute
    November 8th, 2014 at 04:08am
  • aubree james.

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    This is too funny. I love Selina, she perfect, but I cannot wait to see her be ripped a new asshole. <3 I'm stoked!
    November 8th, 2014 at 03:42am
  • aubree james.

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    Oh my God I love you and I can't wait to read this. I feel like you'll put an all new spin on this type of story! Be my NaNo buddy? :)
    October 28th, 2014 at 07:32pm